A day with the Man [ bwwm ] | DISCONTINUED

💥VERY IMPORTANT NOTICE💥

Damn, never thought I would have to do this.

*sighs*

Hey everybody, elamordecoca here and I have important news. I mean, a lot of people have started to read this, I remember in 2015, on a Sunday when I refreshed my works and I saw that I had 1K reads on this, now? It has 80k+!

I am grateful for everyone that has read this book but all good things have to come to an end I suppose?

On more than one occasion, I have been told that the book is hella confusing, would be better if I brushed up the plot a bit because it seemed like I was just stringing along what they do as I go along, and that the beginning is so unclear that they, unfortunately, have to stop reading.

Now, being biased, I was like, 'y'all don't know what it takes to make a book, y'all wildin, its fine', but then I logged out of this account and left it for two months.

I viewed and read my story from another account, both 'A Day with the Man' and 'A Night with the Woman'.

Needless to say, I was confused as ever as to where some details disappeared to and why it seemed like Xalia couldn't make up her mind in what she wanted to do. I mean, it looked like she had a 180 degree personality change by the second or third chapter, and I couldn't take it. At all.

Honestly, I didn't want it to come to this but my style of writing for this book was so trash at the beginning, it's hard for me to update for the second book with a fresh new flow if the beginning of the trilogy isn't up to par.

So two choices I had to choose from, either take down the book completely and forget about it, or rewrite it, provided that the characters positions and personalities might be subject to change.

Yet, I also wanted to ask.

Take down completely?

Or

Publish a new rewrite?

- Bearing in mind I got this idea when I was 14 and started writing when I was 15, when I had little to no knowledge on how to write a book. But now I'm 17, and this book isn't cutting up to my standards.

Now, I'm going to focus a lot more on my other account, but also, Hath No Fury might move there as well. Not that I'm going to leave wattpad, (I've already been here for 6 years) but I just want to set the bar for myself.

Different expectations and standards, you know?

Let me know in any way.

Come December 10th, the decision will be made.

Thanks for reading if you did,

Elamordecoca.