(For the people that dident read the guide about what cats are and shiz. Moonclaw is a rouge he is a dark grey tom with jet black paws and tail. a chain collar around neck. battle scars on chest and nose.)
(Wait also there battle patrol was small so yeah i added 3 new characters. Greyclaw- grey tom with black rings around paws and tail. Treeleaf- brown she with black leopard like spots. Softsong: white long furred she (mom of cottonpelt and snowblaz. All three in battle patrol also i added sunleaf to the patrol ewe)
Dewpaws pov---
The river flowed kn front of us as we waited for loststar to give us permission to leave the cave. Treeleafs tail swished impatiently. Finally loststar flicked his ear and the patrol followed. He patrol followed the river a few fox lengths till the scent markers came.
"Well wait in these bushes for a patrol, when they cme dont let themnpush us twords the river."
Loststar whispered
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Paws padded on the ground as a mistclan patrol padded to the scent line. I recognized featherpaws white and silver fur, i talked to her at gatherings. Also i saw tornear, eaglemist, and ivystorm. Also a little black tom fallowed. It was a
Fallenpaw, he was made an apprentice a moon ago. Ivysorm stoped and scented the air.
"i smell leafclan... to many to count"
Fallenpaw glanced nervously at ivystorm who whispered something to him and he bounded off. Loststar stared as ivystorm and eaglemist turned twords the bush. He flicked his tail and wwe lounged forward with a yowl. I found my self on featherpaw. She tried to shake me off but i clung on with my farpaws rakeing down her spine. I tried to reach fot her scruff but i got thrown back
"MISTCLAN ATTACK!"
a yowl rang and mistclan warriors sprang at us. He mistclan cats semmed to have a smaller group of cats, and most of them looked skinny. There all have starved!
Moonclaws pov~
I sat down crunching into my mouse. I heard rustling in the distance and a howl rang out.
"MISTCLAN ATTACK!"
Ths howl was followed by fighting noises. I crept and looked through a bush, keeping hiden. I saw a flash of grey and brown fur.
Dew
Dew was fighting along side a young shecat. Her peach and maple pelt shone in the darkening light of the sky. She nodded to dew who went to help another cat. I heard her call this peach cat "Dapplepaw". Maby i can make dew suffer alittle this way. She'd probably blame her self for leaveing dapplepaw behind. A brown and russet tom lunched at dapplepaw.
No thats my prey!
I lunged forward rakeing my claws down the russet toms side. Dapplepaw backed up in surprise as i clawed the cats face. He looked at me and dapplepaw, who fluffed out her furr. And ran off to fight someone else im battle.
"who are you?"
Dapplepaw turned to me. I had to think of a story.
"im moonclaw, mistclan expanded there territory on the other side. They chased me out of my home in the process. Dont worry im on your side aginst them"
I lied. She nodded and turned to battle
"i saw a mistclan cat sneeking in the reeds over there"
I pointed to a little place away from the battle. She nodded and crept into the reeds. As soon as her back was turned a pounced slicing my claws down her flank.
"YOU LIED!"
she screeched in surprise
"your fault for being gollible"
She threw me of with surprising strength. She threw her self at me, but i saw her mastack.she left her tail in the open. I slid under her and grabed her tail in my jaws. She wiped around into my waiting claws and i had her pinned by the neck
"say goodbye"
Dewpaws pov~
I jumped away from dewpaw to help sunleaf who was under attack by a large black tom and mistpaw. Sunleaf took on the black tom and i fought mistpaw. She threw herself at me with extended claws. I douged to the left and without thinking i leaped up and plunged down. Mistclaw looked up in surprise as my claws raked from her ear to her jaw. She shreeked in pain and ran off blindly. I was about to go help sunleaf with the black tom. But an ear splitting shreek split through the air. Every one stoped and i looked around. Then blazepaws terrified mew rang through the air. Makeing me freeze in my spot
"DAPPLEPAW!!!"
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shattered memories. (( Never to be finished... ))
Fantasy*EDIT This story will never be finished. I'm no longer into writing, and honestly this story was pretty cringe worthy as it is. So yeah.. bye an apprentice named dewpaw has a lost memory of her past. when she finds a mysterious, yet familiar cat who...
