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7. Trust

Author: diyaadhikary

The trust between them was endearing. It evolved slowly and eventually which I found good. The story is still going on. Also the chapters were short.

First of all, don't change from third person's perspective to first person's perspective. Please don't use italic unless writing flashback, thoughts, notes or letter.

Second, if you write in Hindi then please make sure to include translation because sometimes it gets confusing.

I would also highly recommend to not include author's note in the beginning. If you forget something, wattpad always allows you to edit so kindly mention it either in the starting or the bottom.

I have already mentioned in the previous review and they apply here also.

Overall: It was nice except I got really confused in some places. It really needs heavy editing.