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13. Shivika ki shaadi abhi baaki hai

Author- ManyaAg

I loved how you attached those pictures in the beginning of chapters as the title of the chapter.

So I had these basic problems while reading the story, can you please give translation of the dialogues?

Second, please write the dialogues in inverted commas. Third, either write the story in present tense or past tense. This story was a mix of both and it's not at all amusing.

Please use the punctuation marks only once not twice or thrice.

I couldn't help but notice the usage of a particular line was too much - now this is enough for Shivaay. This line has been used too much in the story. Can we use some other lines please?

Please keep your thoughts to yourself, readers are not interested in knowing what you think about the situation but what the characters think about it. This is so not appealing. A big no no to this.

See, I have been brutally honest as you wanted me to be. Don't get all upset after reading this review but try to improve it. And please respond to it by either voting or commenting.