HEY? HOW DO YOU EXPECT ME TO REVIEW SOMETHING THAT HAS BARELY STARTED?
Dude the story barely contained 1000 words. It is like reading a one shot- which I don't review - how are you supposed to see what the story line has?
Author- Noxholic_miss
Well even though I don't really have things to say, I'll just give basic tips - which I'm certain I have given in almost every review.
«» I hate the way you have written the title. It would have been just fine in lower case or even in upper case but why mix both. Why?
1 | LoVe Is An AdVeNtUre (How you have written it)
2 | Love is an adventure
3 | LOVE IS AN ADVENTURE
These small things make a bigger difference than you think. It helps to attract the reader. Then you wrote the title of the first part something like this- !!...DesCriPtiOn...!!
What the actual fudge dude?
It's a major turn off in any story.
«» Take care of capitalization. Especially proper nouns.
«» One full stop is enough. You don't have to use more than one. Really, why though?
«» Typos and spelling error. I don't expect perfect grammar or the best descriptions but at least the spelling errors?
«» Try writing the full name. Honestly, if you can't even bother to get yourself to write full names then I'm sorry I can't be any more bothered to read your story. Make an effort. Unless you don't make an effort it's not worth it.
«» Bother updating?
YOU ARE READING
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