18. Yours truly, Dev

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Author — kickstart_x

Yay! I finished reading it so quickly. First off, I absolutely love the title. It's so cute. Your characters are so cute. And when I read this story, I was like 'Hey, where can I get my own Dev' . So yeah.... *grins like an idiot*

Also I am still wondering if Dev was the anonymous sender of that letter.

The only thing wrong with this story is Sonakshi's reaction. It's not exactly wrong but...

The thing is, in the prologue Sonakshi thinks that, 'come on Sonakshi, you have seen worse' So my point is that Sonakshi has obviously seen the worst of people so when people have seen things like these, they become paranoid against others. They worry too much about their safety. And Sonakshi feels that she's just through some little trauma, which is weird. She has been kidnapped for four years so her reaction is not really suitable.

What I say is, just take this story a little slow.

It's good otherwise :) Just spelling errors and a few grammatical errors. Nothing much.

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