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11. The fault in our stars

Author: Noxholic_miss

The thing I like about this is that it's a Shivika and TFIOS fanfic.

Well, let's start off with please mention the title properly, the way you have mentioned right now is a big no no.

You really need to mention that the plot belongs to John Green, the author of TFIOS. It seems disrespectful.

Second, you know the fault in our stars happens to be one of my favorite books and reading this piece of work made me cringe. Sorry, no offense but really this is the truth. The book made me feel emotions and this....

I'm quite sure if you have read the book then you will know that we write the dialogues in inverted commas, don't we? So I think you really really need to edit it and if you are the book's fan then you should do it even more.

I won't point out much because there are basically just two parts in the book.

Sorry, no offense to the writer. I know I overacted but it's a TFIOS fan fiction and how do you expect a fan to not react this way?!!

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