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20. Twist Wala Love

Author— maishamomtaz

Let's see. It was supposed to be a book but let's just say it didn't feel like one. I literally felt like I was reading a play. There's a difference in a play and a book.

There were basically no descriptions in this book. I repeat none at all. And that frustrated me. I mean no descriptions for feelings and not even for what kind of attire Sona was wearing.

Do not add so many pictures. It is fine when it's banners. Dude, it's a book and I don't want to see pictures instead of actual thing. Every now and then there are pictures.

Please write in inverted commas. Take care of spelling errors.

Do write a prologue, instead of giving introduction of their families. We want to know them through the story. Slowly and gradually.

Work on editing. The story begs for an editing.

There goes my little rant.