My friend constantly tells me to update, so I make her happy and do. I'm planning on writing another story. Can I have some feedback?
-NIALL'S POV-
I can't believe they have a fireplace they can roast marshmmellows in! I must have eaten at least 20, although Sam beat me by one in the 30-second eating contest we had. That is my kind of girl! After stuffing themselves, Louis and Harry turned to game-mode. 20 Questions was first. Of course, they had to pick on her. ''Sam!!"
''Favourite food, colour,and actor?''
''Pizza, purple, and Hugh Jackman.''
''Favourite movie?''
''THE AVENGERS!!!!!!!''
''Ok.... any siblings?"
''............ Two.Calvin,and Kyle.''
Ky responded gently. ''Sam.....''
Sam looked down, and bitterly corrected herself. ''One. Kyle died in a car crash.''
I was sitting clsest to her, so I pulled her on my lap while she cried softly. I could only tell because the front of my shirt was damp. That little episode changed the game to Never Have I Ever. Louis started. ''Never have I ever... had a bra thrown at me!''
Harry and Ky put a finger down, making Sam laugh with tears streaming down her face. ''I....I...I remember that!'' We all raised our eyebrows at the two of them. Sam smiled.
''It was my time of the month, and I was cranky. Then Ky came in, and put a bra on my bed and told me to get up. I didn't want to, so I threw the bra at her. Long story short, it landed on her face, then in the pancake batter she was holding, so I had to make dinner.''
''Dinner?Who makes pancakes for dinner?'' Harry questioned.
''MY MOM DOES? ARE YOU INSULTING MY MOTHER AFRO MAN?! IT'S ON LIKE DONKEY KONG!!!!'' Sam hollered. Harry yelped and hid behind me. I smirked, and stepped aside. I can't wait to see Harry get out of this one.
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