We are just a bunch of people stuck in a state of division

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Ok, ok now. First and for most of all, the title is long. Too long, I know. But you know me, I suck at naming things k. Now, furthermore, IT'S OFFICIAL!  our scout leader hated the first reverse poem I made and said it doesn't make sense and asked me to revise it. But, you dont just revise a reverse poem. It's not that simple!! SO I decided to make another and different one instead. And here it is! I hope she likes my second trash. Ok anyways, please enjoy and here it is!



We are just a bunch of people stuck in a state of division



I do not believe that

Something as simple as unity can fix this

I understand now that

Fear rules us over courage

It is not true that

Harmony will come to us someday

We know that

being in a state of concord can "change the society"

Is a lie, and

"we don't need anyone"

Is true

I don't think that

After love there will be peace and happiness

Because I believe that

Our nation is full of dark souls

It is impossible that

Everyone is worthy enough to be trusted

I know

There is no good in anyone

And I refuse to think that

We are all intelligent, loyal, brave and hopeful

The truth is

We are all cowards

It's a lie that

Doing good by merely working together can get us united

And I am positive that

No one will help another just because they're different

It's not even true that

We can continue to persevere during hard times

I agree that

We do it, we follow orders just because we are told so

I don't approve that

In anyway,

We will all become one.




But that's when later on I realized, that I just needed to reverse my way of thinking.




We will all become one

In anyway,

I don't approve that

We do it, we follow orders just because we are told so

I agree that

We can continue to persevere during hard times

It's not even true that

No one will help another just because they're different

And I am positive that

Doing good by merely working together can get us united

It's a lie that

We are all cowards

The truth is

We are all intelligent, loyal, brave and hopeful

And I refuse to think that

There is no good in anyone

I know

Everyone is worthy enough to be trusted

It is impossible that

Our nation is full of dark souls

Because I believe that

After love there will be peace and happiness

I don't think that

It's true that

"we don't need anyone"

It's a lie, and

being in a state of concord can change the society

We know that

Harmony will come to us someday

It is not true that

Fear rules us over courage

I understand now that

Something as simple as unity can fix this

And I do not believe that


We are just a bunch of people stuck in a state of division.



Now, I hope this is better that the last one. I might never know, but it's all up to you all, so...please vote! thanks <3

EDIT:

Ok, so ,the thing is, about the fact that I still needed to perform this... 

...

IT SUCK. If you would've seen me out there you would have been laughing! I was Rattling my bones! I memorized if perfectly but became blank as soon as I saw the people around me. Plus, the leader I think has a really RUSTY BUTCH FACE which made me even more worried. It's my first ever doing something in front of people. So, uh, yeah. I SCREWED UP IN SHORT. 

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