Hey guys! I'm not too happy with my story right now, it's not very detailed, it's just like this happened then this happened etc. I just feel like there's something I can do to make it a whole lot better but idk what. If u have any ideas please comment. It just needs to be more detailed and I need to spend more time planning it out and writing it, I need to make it more descriptive. And it won't hurt my feelings if u agree😂. Just please comment on what I can do to make my story better.
Love u!
-abby❤️
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Blue eyes and the key
Teen FictionThis is a part 2 to my story "what happened to the old me." This is a few years into the future and Devan is in college now. This is still his pov.
