Diary full of memories[unedited]

Read this plz:)

Not a chapter sorry:(
So,I wrote this new fanfic,which is an Auslly one cause I never wrote one before and I'm pretty excite for this cause it's totally fictional.
And I thought I want you to read the first chapter and tell me what do you think
If you do liked it,then add it to your library.
I already published it.
This is what the story is about:
"There's a time when teenagers aren't allow to be in love.
A world with crew laws.
No love.
No emotion.
What happened when you fell in love?
My answer to you is:You won't be able to live.
One touch,one feels..
Game over."
Hope that caught your eyes;)
Here goes nothing:
Chapter1:
This is a century when teenagers aren't allow to be in love.
This is a city where people don't have emotion,and not to talk about:love.
Honestly,they're like dead people.
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"Ally,breakfast ready"Ally's mom,Penny calls.
Ally groans."Another freaking day"
She gets up lazily and literally trow anything on that she won't be naked.
Well,there's no need to impress boys
She puts on her jacket and head to the door.
Her mom comes out the kitchen with a plate of eggs and bacons.
Typical breakfast.
"Where are you going?"She asks.Like she even care.
"Out"Ally simply replies as she puts on her boots.
"Okay,love you"She puts down the plate and digs in her food.Not looking at her so-called 'daughter'
"I doubt about that"
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So,when did this happen.You may ask.
President Grace.The oh-so-great president started all this.
She was only 24 when she was competing.
She acted so innocent and nice,she even made a promise that there won't be a thing that's called 'pain'
But,they never thought she'll be the one who gives the pain.
Back then,Ally was only 7 and she has to face all this.
Not being love.
She remembered the day when the announcement came out,lots of couples got forced to be apart.
And then,argue happened.
The scene still can't get out her mind.
Blood everywhere .Yelling.Pulling.Gun shooting.
Crying.
All they wanted was to be loved and want to have a happy life.
People found out why President Grace is doing this.
The one and only reason is because she never got the chance to be loved,so in her crazy,mad brain told her that if she didn't get the love she deserved,no one else can.
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Ally walks to the lake where she normally can calm down when the world she lives in is fighting for something they want.
She starts to play the dry grass on the ground,but keeping her eyes on the distance.
"Mind I sit down?" A boy voice asks.
She was glad she didn't scream.
What if they got caught?
Boys and girls aren't allow to be alone.
They will be killed.
She wants to yell at him and tells him to stay away from her as far as he can.
But instead,she said sure.
Huge mistake.
She didn't bother to looked up,she was too busy regretting the trouble she got herself into.
"I'm Austin.Austin Moon"A big,yet seems warm hand reaches out.
She looks up to see a blonde with hazel-melting eyes staring at her.
She reaches her hand over and shakes it.
"Ally.Ally Dawson"
To my surprise,she is smiling.
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Like I was saying,I hoped you liked it:D