Broken in a Heartbeat- A Marauders era story (temporarily discontinued)

Chapter one

Makaylas POV:
I walk over to the big scarlet train and take a deep breath. It's my third year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and to say I've changed from last year is an understatement. My dirty blonde hair is up to my hips and I colored it so the tips are blue. Due to lack of food, I've lost all my baby fat and my curves are more defined.

Sadly my normal sparkle in my brown eyes are gone. My dad passed away this summer, and my mother things it's my fault.

I find a compartment and lay my head down, wanting to catch some sleep. I get pulled into a memory I want to forget.

FlashBack
"Dad! Lets go to the ice rink!" I start to do a happy dance at my idea. My dad chuckles at my childish behavior, but nods none the less.

We get in our Toyota and start to drive to our local Ice Rink, laughing and being weird all together.

It all happened at once, that i didn't even see the big semi truck until it hit us head on.

3rd Person POV:
The beat up red truck does a flip, getting hit full on, making the thirteen year old girl scream.

They landed on their tops and the girl pulled herself out, with a broken leg and many many cuts, she looks back and sees her father, struggling to stay awake.

"Dad! Daddy!! Stay awake! Please daddy! I love you" Makayla cried out, her voice in absolute pain.

"M-a-a-ka-yla. I-i love y-o-ou" Raymond brown died at 4:30 pm to a car accident, his daughter being put into St. Mungos for two weeks after.
~end of Flashback~
I woke up to voices, sounding distant and familiar, but I can't put a finger on it.

"Should we wake her? She's crying pretty hard" one voice said.

"Do we know her? I don't think I've seen her before" another says. I here a murmur of agreement and I start to wake up, making them all inhale.

I open my eyes and make a sorta squeak noise, but covered my mouth. Sitting their, was the Marauders. Let my break them down.

James Potter: Black messy hair and hazel eyes. Popular, and in love with Lily Evans, a muggle born in my year. He's in Gryffindor.

Serious Black: ear length black hair, stormy grey eyes. School player, and teen heartthrob. Gryffindor.

Remus Lupin: blonde hair and chocolate brown eyes. Scars littering his face. Loves to read and always has his face stuck in a book. Gryffindor.

Peter Pettegrew: sandy blonde hair, brown eyes. Noisy rat type look to his face. Not as handsome as the other boys. Gryffindor.

"Brown?" James breathes out and everyone goes wide eyed, and Remus looked up from his book. He. Looked. Up. From. His. Book.

"Uh...hi?" I say stupidly and the take in my appearance. I looked at the compartment door and I could see my appearance, and I winced.

My brown eyes were sulked in, and i was like insanely too skinny. Making me look like I was all bones, except I could see the dark bruises on my arms, and face, along with the cuts from the car crash.

I made another squeaking noise and I grabbed my stuff, running out of the compartment, leaving four dumbstruck boys.

I finally find an empty compartment and breath a sigh of relief. I look like crap. My normal dirty blonde hair is all dead and my chocolate eyes lost its sparkle.

The rest of the trip went by fast, and soon I'm standing by the carriages, my eyes wide in fear of the black winged creatures pulling the carriages.