Vampire [Conclusion]

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We've four winners for this category.

I'll just go traditional and crowned the top 4 scores.

The finalists list is at the end of this chapter. Scroll through to see your book review. I've bold titles and username, and total score for easier view.

Here we go.

The list is in no particular order.



1. Offspring by @XxRiah916Xx

Total : 45/55

Review: Usually your kind of story made someone like me uncomfortable with the concept but you manage to make the readers emphasize on the character's emotions rather than situations. The plot are captivating and easy to follow as your writing are very good.The characters situation are well written and linked perfectly to reality which is a good thing so does the personalities. The description are also written well but at the same time it felt flat.


2. Passionless by @RoyalynDixon

Total : 39.5/55

Review: I will be blunt and straightforward. Your story is like a complete compilation of cliché. It might be enjoyable to some but I'm not a big fan of cliché. The characters are overpowered, too edgy and too good looking perfect. The description are okay, and your writing are so detailed and beautiful at the same time some of the details kinda send off track from the main point or current events.


3. Kindred Spirit by @coolcourtney5

Total : 41/55

Review: At first, the description sounds nice and thrilling but the enjoyment through out the chapters are up and down. The concepts are unique and rare to fine at the same time it's predictable. The characters are not that memorable but they aren't that bad also. Also it felt too long for each chapter for me.


4. Vaenalo by @BlondeBomb365

Total : 45/55

Review: The description are well written but sounds boring and cliché. But when I read the chapters, it made me hooked up into the stories. The plot are captivating and so does the characters. Usually I cringed when the characters are perfectly good looking but the plot made me ignore that fact and instead made me focused on their stories instead. I also like how you play the vampire myths in their own view and the differences between their realms.


5. Infinite Loop by @DreamySnowflake8008

Total : 43/55

Review: The description Is confusing as heck. It raise many questions in my head. Some may read and some may not. When I read the beginning chapters, it was captivating then next chapter sounds dramatic and complicated then to edgy and confusing then revert back to intresting. It's a rollercoaster but not high just confusing.

The characters, they are... Kinda somewhat relatable but not that memorable. But overall it's well written but the description please make it less confusing. 



Please, applaud for the winners:

THE WINNER LIST

>> FIRST PLACE: Offspring by @XxRiah916Xx and Vaenalo by @BlondeBomb365 with 45/55

>> SECOND PLACE: Infinite Loop by @DreamySnowflake8008 with 43/55

>> THIRD PLACE: Kindred Spirit by @coolcourtney5 with 41/55


Pray to luck and talents, thank you and congratulation to the winners.

Winners, please PM me if you want the sticker.

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