ROMANCE [Concluded]

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FIRST PLACE: Miami Outlaw by @MeredithAnne1

Title: 4/5

Plot: 9/10

Characterization: 9/10

Cover: 3.5/5

Description: 4/5

Grammar: 9/10

Creativity: 9/10

Total: 47.5/55



SECOND PLACE: The Dangerous Ones by @DELynch43

Title: 2.5/5

Plot: 9/10

Characterization: 8/10

Cover: 2.5/5

Description: 5/5

Grammar: 10/10

Creativity: 7/10

Total: 44/55



THIRD PLACE: Down These Country Roads by @CaseyGrieco

Title: 2.5/5

Plot: 7/10

Characterization: 6/10

Cover: 2/5

Description: 2.5/5

Grammar: 8/10

Creativity: 6/10

Total: 34/55

Review: I suggest you bold the narrator's name instead of having them as normal text since it's hard to pick out.



Normal with You by @Bee_91

Title: 3/5

Plot: 7/10

Characterization: 5/10

Cover: 2/5

Description: 3/5

Grammar: 7/10

Creativity: 5/10

Total: 32/55



Given To The Prince by @LyndaCoker

Title: 2/5

Plot: 7/10

Characterization: 7/10

Cover: 0/5

Description: 2/5

Grammar: 9/10

Creativity: 5/10

Total: 32/55



Promise Me by @8Renee

Title: 2.5/5

Plot: 5/10

Characterization: 4/10

Cover: 1.5/5

Description: 2.5/5

Grammar: 8/10

Creativity: 6/10

Total: 29.5/55



The Different Shades of Love by @BrookeN66

Title: 3/5

Plot: 3/10

Characterization: 4/10

Cover: 0.5/5

Description: 3/5

Grammar: 5/10

Creativity: 3/10

Total: 21.5/55

Review: You should review your work and split the first chapter into paragraphs, not condense everything into one. It really degrades your writings and the momentum you're building up.

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