Chick-Lit [Conclude]

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FIRST PLACE: The many dates of Gypsy Clark by @AmethystAmber87

Title: 4/5

Plot: 7.5/10

Characterization: 8/10

Cover: 5/5

Description: 5/5

Grammar: 10/10

Creativity: 8/10

Total: 47.5/55



SECOND PLACE: Wandering with You by @Jazzy1983

Title: 2.5/5

Plot: 6/10

Characterization: 6/10

Cover: 3/5

Description: 3/5

Grammar: 10/10

Creativity: 6/10

Total: 36.5/55



THIRD PLACE: Petty Betty by @ReigningDesire

Title: 3/5

Plot: 3/10

Characterization: 4/10

Cover: 4/5

Description: 4/5

Grammar: 10/10

Creativity: 7/10

Total: 35/55





Undercover Royals by @sandyn101

Title: 3/5

Plot: 5/10

Characterization: 7/10

Cover: 2/5

Description: 2.5/5

Grammar: 9/10

Creativity: 6/10

Total: 34.5/55


Control by @Brooklyn3433

Title: 3.5/5

Plot: 5/10

Characterization: 4/10

Cover: 3.5/5

Description: 4/5

Grammar: 8/10

Creativity: 5/10

Total: 33/55

Review: Your opening is very confusing. I suggest you ground the setting first with a couple of descriptive sentences, letting the narrative element clear, before introducing the male character talking back to the FMC.


First Shades of Love by @BrookeN66

Title: 4/5

Plot: 5/10

Characterization: 4/10

Cover: 3/5

Description: 1/5

Grammar: 10/10

Creativity: 6/10

Total: 33/55

Review: I strongly advise you to revise your blurb. Not only it's confusing (especially your first sentence), it's also a long and windy, unfocused description, generalizes your protagonist.


Trust by @eternalfelicity

Title: 1/5

Plot: 3/10

Characterization: 4.5/10

Cover: 3.5/5

Description: 3/5

Grammar: 10/10

Creativity: 6/10

Total: 31/55


Dirty Dares by @girlfish

Title: 2.5/5

Plot: 5/10

Characterization: 3/10

Cover: 3.5/5

Description: 3/5

Grammar: 7.5/10

Creativity: 6/10

Total: 30.5/55

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