Author: stray_cheese_
Reviewer: sh00kkkkk
Genre: Sad/ Fan Fiction
Title: The title is a very broad phrase so readers may need to guess, for example:"what the hell does he/she remember?!"
Which can lead to being a hook for the readers.
(4.6/5)
Cover: The cover is as simple as it gets which is fine, but when you have a white theme to your account you need to figure out how each cover for each book can stand out as themselves but still stick to theme (look at my covers for ex. all eye looks, but different ones that pop out in their own way). Other than that, it's Gucci 👌🏼
(3/5)
Description: The description's really good! But if you're trying to make it as if Bang Chan is saying it, put a quotation mark on it. Or else it will feel like the reader is the one being the protagonist🤡
(4.7/5)
Plot: I really loved how you kept chapters very short but you could still see it being a story, without using that much words either. I also loved how the it's kind of like a first person view of Bang Chan and it really captured the feelings he had. Other than that, I don't see this much of writing styles in Wattpad so it's very refreshing 😁
(5/5)
Grammar/Spelling: I didn't see that much errors in writing which is really good 😊
I noticed how you take the bold, italic, and underline to your advantage to portray a certain type of emotion and I really really really like that 😫
(5/5)
Overall: I LOVED IT I LOVED IT. Even though I don't stan Stray Kids, this is was a masterpiece and I think I'm going to put it on my personal list because it's so good even if it is sad. And I busted the biggest uwu ever when bangchan were dating, it was too cute.
(4.5/ 5)
This was such a great book, thank you for giving me the chance to review it 🤧🤧🤧💕💕
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