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Review 18| Camp IX

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Reviewer: @LWJessica

Genre: Sci-fi

Cover: I like the cover, it is well made and the woman is similar to the description of the people, however I feel like it doesn't quite fit in with the sci-fi element of the book, maybe add a planet or something that is connected with your story more. Despite this, the cover is good and does attract attention (3.5/5)

Title: I think the title is good as well but is quite generic (a lot of people have titles similar to camp 'something') however, that is not to say that it isn't intriguing as it makes you wonder what the IX stands for at first glance which you then discover as you read. (4/5)

Description: The description is mysterious and draws you in. I think the fact that it is quite short and simple really works with the element of mystery and intrigue. (5/5)

Plot: So far the plot is really well thought out and I am interested to see what happens next. I like that it is almost like two different people as her memories are gone and so far it is like two stories put together almost. I think one way you could improve the book at this early stage would be to be more specific with events in each chapter, some of the latest ones skip over a large period of time and do not go into as much detail as I would personally like (such as her growing relationship with Blaze, you could add a few scenes between them getting close maybe?) however the overall story plot seems to be going in a good direction. (4/5)

Grammar/Spelling: Your spelling is fine but I sometimes find places where you could use better punctuation (adding commas and stuff like that). However, you're use of dialogue is very well domes as it is something I myself struggle with so I commend you on that one. 👍🏻 (4/5)

Overall: I am really enjoying your story so far and will certainly continue reading. I think you have created a very good book and I hope that you will excel as time goes on. Keep up the great work. Well done!
(20.5/25)