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Chapter 1 (Revised)
It looks like the end of the world, bodies were strewn all over the place and everything was in ruins. All seems lost, despite that there were four people that's still standing barely in the midst of all that mess. Out of the four, the three was easily recognized, the blonde boy was Uzumaki Naruto, saviour of Konoha and son of the fourth Hokage. Then there's the raven haired boy with mismatched eyes, he's Uchiha Sasuke, the last surviving Uchiha and a missing-nin. The last one was the pink haired girl, Haruno Sakura, she may be the least recognizable because of her civilian background but she has climb her was up by becoming Senju Tsunade apprentice. The fourth human creature was the cause of all the destruction that has been made.
" Kurama, I'm running out of chakra..at this rate we'll all die" whispers Naruto to himself.
"Don't give up yet kit...are you okay though?" said Kurama, the nine tailed beast who's became the blonde best friend
" It's just chakra exhaustion" Naruto lied.
"Kit, the situation is really bad, the Uchiha boy can barely see and the Haruno girl has run out of chakra...and your sensei is already dead.." the beast said with remorse
What Kurama had said was the fact, it's just impossible to defeat a god, although they have tried to postpone the destruction, the fact that they will be defeated have just dawned on them. Despite that, Sasuke seems to eat more chakra pills and the same goes with Sakura, she's trying to regain her hogyoku, it looks like they're not giving up.
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" See mother, I'm right...we just have to exhaust them and we can defeat them easily" said a black creature known as Black Zetsu to Kaguya, the goddess
"now is the perfect time to crush them and take Indra's and Ashura's power, we will be undefeated mother"
"Yes son, though I have a different plan.." said Kaguya to Zetsu
"Don't tell me...are you really going to use that jutsu?" said Black Zetsu distrustfully
"I think I have perfected it and now is the right time to use it" said Kaguya confidently.
"Whatever you say mother.." Black Zetsu agrees
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"Naruto!" said Sasuke, trying to get his counterpart attention " I don't like the look of that" indicating to Kaguya and Black Zetsu's interaction "we need a new plan"
"I honestly don't know teme..Sakura, maybe you have something on your mind?" asks Naruto referring to the pink haired girl
"We have used up all of our plans, but maybe we can tr-"
Sakura's sentences was cut short because suddenly the goddess shouted
"NINPOU, TAIMU TORABERU NO JUTSU"
Time seems to have stopped and there was a blinding light.
A vortex suddenly appears and Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura was sucked into it.
A/N
THERE YOU GO! A REVISED VERSION OF CHAPTER 1
I changed my writing style into a more legato version of a fanfiction I guess XD.
I didn't change the dialogue or the plot exceedingly though maybe I have to considering the plot holes in the upcoming chapters
After reading hundreds and thousands of fanfiction, I learned the proper way to write a decent fanfic I guess.
So what say you? should I continue it?
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