The Difference

Whoa i feel like i hate this more than i should

I felt more confident as I walked in the halls, I held my head up a little higher. A head full of red hair caught my eye, sitting in the classroom alone. I walked in, sitting on the desk in front of her. She looked me up and down, after taking a deep breath, she spoke. "Your writing is um" she licked her lips, starting biting her bottom lip. "Your writing is amazing." She bit her lip again, looking down. "How are you so confident in yourself? In your writing?" I smiled, I'm not confident in myself at all and most of my writing sucks. 

"It's all about the bluff." I put one foot on each side of the chair she was sitting on. Leaning forward, my face was close to hers. I tried to come off as confident, today I felt like taking a lot of risks. She looked at my lips and stuttered.

"I-I think I'm straight". I smirked at her.

"Would you like to test that theory?" I raised my eyebrows at her, my smirk getting bigger and bigger. She nodded at me, I took her face into my hands as her lips met mine. She gasped a little, as my knees were on either side of her, bringing her in closer. Her hands were like ice cubes, one on my back and the other moving up my thigh. My hands were tangled up in her hair wanting to bring her closer. Once I felt her hands on my hips I sighed into her, she folded her legs under her, bringing her face up to mine, smiling. She squeezed on my hips and kissed me again. I kissed her down her neck, going slowly, her body was a canvas that I had yet to paint. She shuddered as I got to her collarbone, my lips made their way back to her's, she was more forceful now, more confident. She dragged her hands up and down my back. She pulled me into her lap, biting on my lip.

I've been working on this story for a really long time (this part has been in my drafts for at least a month) and I got more views than I thought I would, considering this is my first gay fandom fanfiction story yay for me I'm really proud. But I hate this story so so much because of the sucky grammar and the plot line that literally looks like a ball of yarn gone wrong (i mean where the fuck did delilah come from and where the hell was that going?). I was watching the vampire diaries and (it took six whole seasons) but the first gay couple on the show that I know of kissed. And they said "you think this is hard? try being gay in the nineteen hundreds" so I wanted to write a fanfiction story about them so I might try that after research and writing an actual plot line. But I hope that you enjoyed my story while it lasted and please check out my other stories because this one is coming to an end. I actually really really don't like writing heterosexual stories for some reason right now they just bore me out of my mind so I will continue writing lesbian stories original or fanfiction I have no clue but check out my other stories please! thanks for reading ;) if you want me to start another choni story that I will plan out a lot better please comment down below!!