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Hello fellow Android Readers!

First off, thank you so much for continuing your support of this story despite me barely updating it. I really appreciate it. 

That's why I wanted to let you all know what's been going on on my end. 

I didn't like the plot, character development or way this story was going so I stopped updating it so I could rewrite it and make it better. Like, ten times better. I have rewritten up to the most recent update and I would really like to post it so I can continue writing the remaining half of the story on here. Before I do that though, I want to inform you all of a couple of major changes that are coming about in the story. 

1. A new character has been added, Mac. He's going to be really important to the future plot of the story when I write the second book. He's present in the first few chapters.

2. Gender Swap, I changed the gender of two of the characters. Instead of Neptune and Mercury being boys I made them girls. It was better for their character development and made them more interesting. 

3. Plot revisions, I rewrote quite a few plot points in the book so they wouldn't be full of holes and so they would all flow better together. I don't personally think you have to reread the book to understand what's going on but I totally would, you'll probably enjoy it way more. 

As of today, I am posting these chapter revisions. I hope you guys will love them and I hope you'll keep reading Android :)

-Mari. 

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