Okay I know its taking a while to publish, it is because I honestly don't like how this story is going. So I had removed some chapters and will repost it with the title and the word update. I had added, took out a few things that will be essential in this book so I suggest re reading it again. Honestly I didn't like the fact that Collin was yelling at Hazel making her look like the bad guy. Though what is happening between the two will not change but this book was lacking something and I'm trying to find out what.
That is not who he is and I am trying to redirect Collin into who he truly is. Of course he will still get upset. but I feel like Collin is picking on Hazel.
Again sequels are hard to write.
In most movies with trilogies or sequels, the sequels are never as good as the first. The sequel can either kill the story line or re shape it and make it better. That's my opinion anyways.
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Entanglement
FantasyThe water is my home...It is the only place I feel free...I can go anywhere, be anything as long as I kept to myself...It has been years on my own and every once in a while I return to a place I had found happiness. He made me happy until we were ke...
