Ok so, I did a little bit of editing on Our Rainbow Colored Symphony. I did this because I did some more reading on Ochako's disease, and I got some things wrong. I didn't want to offend anyone by being careless, so I edited a couple of things so it was more accurate. Here's some of the things that were changed:
- Ochako does not wheeze when running. She hasbad coordiantion and balance, which will get worse over time.
- The backstory of her passing out when she was a Freshman no longer exists, and her passing out during soccer is now due to her hitting her head on the ground due to a lack of balance.
I will probably make a few more edits in the future (not large or plot changing ones), but I'll be sure to let y'all know if I do. Now, here's a question:
I'm about to start writing the next chapter, so should I make it focused on Ochako's relationship with Bakugo and Deku, make it about other relationships in the story, or both?
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MizahJust some random stuff that I can't squeeze into my books, because it would be unprofessional.
