BASED ON A TRUE STORY!!!!(HORROR)

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This will be an os based on Avneil it will be a horror one so enjoy and now let's start.......

Based on some true events-:

Mumbai ek aisa shehar(city) jhaa zindagi sirf chalti hi nahi bhagti hai toh yeh ghatna bhi hai Mumbai ki jaha din ki roshni aur raat ki chakachaundh sabko alag rakhti ek saath rehkar bhi log alag alag rehte hai.....

Yeh kahani hai avni aur neil ki..

Avni aur Neil jinki kuch mahino pehle hi shaadi huyi thi aur woh log abhi abhi apne naye ghar jo ki 29th floor par tha jaha har pal thandi hawaayein jab badan ko chuti toh aisa lagta maano kisi ne bijli dauda dii ho mein apne aakhon mein sapne sajaaye enter kiya.

Bahut khush the dono kyuki Mumbai jaise shehar mein unhone apna ghar kharid liya tha . Par bechaare unhe kya pata tha abhi unke saath kya kya hone waala tha.

Avni was a housewife and Neil a mechanical engineer and unhe uss ghar mein shift huye 1 hafte ho gaye the.
Sab kuch achaa chal raha tha ab tak roz Neil office se ghr aata woh log saath mein khaana khaate and so jaate but ek din while having their dinner Neil got a call-:

" Mr Neil khanna aapko ek important project ke liye London 🇬🇧jaana hoga as it will be very beneficial for you as well as our company you will get promoted to CEO"

I am so happy sir but mai nahi jaa skta as meri shaadi ko kuch mahine hi huye nadi abhi abhi hum apne new ghar mein shift huye hai i can't leave my wife alone I am sorry. Neil said

Mr khanna tell us your final decision tomorrow. Thank you.

Avni asked --: kya huya Neil kiska phone tha ?

Neil-: kuch nahi avni khana khaao.

Avni-: batao naa Neil pls

Aree kuch nahi avni office se phone tha and he told her what was said to him.

Avni-: Bas itni si baat Neil tum jaao waise hui ek hafte mein toh tum aa hi jaaoge and mai manage kar lungi.

Neil-: kaise karogi avni Manage tumhe pata hai koi bhi neighbor se humari baat bhi nahia hoti agar tumhe kisi cheez ki zaroorat padegi toh tum kya karogi.

A-: Aree sab ho jaayega Neil tum pls jaao mere liye apni success ke saath sacrifice bilkul mat kro and mai manage kar lungi yaha you don't worry.

Neil-: But avni......

Avni-: Neil pls ab jaao bhi come on.

Neil-: achaa baba thik hai but tum kuch dino ke liye maa papa aur bebe ko bula lo yaha.

Avnj-: haa Neil good idea waise bhi mujhe unke saath time spend karne ko nahi mila mai unhe bula lungi.

Okay avni chalo late ho raha kal mujhe jaldi uthna padega as I have to know the timings of when to leave for London.

A-: okay Neil chalo

And they slept.......,...........

Next day Neil left for London directly from his office.

And avni called shweta-:

Shweta-: hello haa avni beta kaisi ho??

Avni-: ji pairi pauna mummy ji thik hu aap bataiye

Shweta-: mai bhi thik hu Neil chala gaya London??

Avni -: jii mummy ji woh chale gaye achaa mummy ji àaplog aa jaaiye naa mumbai mujhe bhi akele achaa nahi lag raha hum saath mein time bhi spend kar lenge.

Shweta -: great idea avni par hum 2-3 din baad hi aa paayenge kyuki bebe kisi tabiyat abhi thodi kharab hai.

Avni-: Aree kya ho gaya bebe ko mummy??

shweta -: kuch nahi beta, bas thoda bukhar hai aur kuch nahi

Avni-: achaa thik hai mummy ji khayal rakhiyega apna bhi abhi waise bhi mausam bahut kharab chal raha hai and bebe ko bhi pairi pauna keh dijiyega mera.

Shwta -: Haan beta thik hai tum bhi khayal rakhna apna. Bye

Avni-: jii bye

Ab mai Neil ko bhi call kar ke puch leti hu

Neil -: hello avni kaisa raha aaj ka din mere bina?? Bahut bore ho rahi hogi naa tum.

A-: haan Neil tum batao tumhara kaisa chal rhaa sab kuch.

They were talking like this for some more time ki avni ko ek awaaz aati hai (some whispering sound just in her ears) .

Neil mujhe aise lag raha hai jaise koi mere kaam mein kuch bol raha hai.

Haan toh avni hum phone mein baat kar rahe hai toh tumhare kaan mein mai hi bol raha hu naa .

Neil I can hear something whispering sound Neil .

Aree avni kuch nahi hai you are just Overthinking.

Maybe Neil.............
Achaa okay Neil ab mai jaa rahi sone kal baat karte hai.

Jaise hi avni me lights off kiye usse laga ki uske balcony mein koi hai woh gayi dheere- dheere balcony ki taraf

Kaun hai kaun hai waha par maine abhi kisi ko toh dekha hai saamne aao
Avni shouted ........

Woh gyi waha par and usne dekha ki waha par koi nahi hai ......... Bas halki halki hawaayein jo uss se kuch kehna chahti ho maano...

Avni abhi wapas mudi hi thi ki waha balcony pe rakha hua uska flowerpot neeche gir gaya woh bahut darr gayi
Kyuki naa waha par koi tha aur naa hi hawa itni chal rahi thi uska flower pot gir jaaye.....

But phir bhi usne dekhene ki koshish ki aur neeche jhaakne lagi shayad use kuch dikh jaaye but guess what uske baad jo hua uss se avni ki cheekhe nikal aayi woh chillane lagi zor zor se usey laga ki kisi ne uska gala pakad liya hai and uska gala daba raha hai.

But after sometime everything became normal and avni ne ussey sapna samjh ke chhod diya.....
Aur chale gayi sone jab woh sone lagi toh usse bahut ajeeb si aawazein aane lagi aise jaise ki koi uske upar waala floor khured (drill) raha ho aur usse upar se hi dekh raha ho ......,

usne upar dekha toh par phir waha koi nahi tha ,haan aawaz abhi bhi aa hi rahi thi aur woh nahi so paayi uss raat..

Agle din usne socha ki yeh baat kis se share kare par koi nahi tha jis se woh yeh baat bol paati sab usse pagal samajhne lagte shayad 😭.

Agle din ki raat huyi phir wahi aawazein aane lagi iss bar aur tez bahut tez aur woh bahut darr gayi thi aur usne socha bas aaj raat jaise nikal legi agle din woh security guard se upar ke ghar waalo ki complaint karegi.

Phir agla din hua aaj shweta prakash and bebe bhi aane waale the.

Woh gayi aur usne security guard se complaint ki , uss baare mein uske baad usne jo suna ussey yakin hi nahi hua usne kaha ki.....

Woh flat pichle 5 saal se band hai .....

Ab socho aapke ghar ke upar se koi aawaz aati hai aisa lagta hai ki koi aapko jhaak raha hai and aapko pata chalta hai ki waha koi bhi nahi rehta kya hoga aapka ... Jiii wahi haal tha avni kaam bhi

Baaki sab bhi aaye usne sabko yeh baat batayi sab hasne lage yeh bol ke tumhe koi dhokha huya hoga,
Woh kuch nahi bol paayi

Phir raat huyi and usne bola ki dekhiye aap log ko bhi aaj aayegi aawaz phir wahi aawaz hone lagi raat ke kadke 2:30 hi baje the aur ,
aaj toh aise lag raha tha jaise kisi ne avni ke ghar kaa terrace ki ukhaad diya ho............ Sab bahut daar gaye

aaj avni ke paas upar ke flat ki chabi thi

Woh security guard and sab ke saath gayi upar uss hi flat mein and usne taala khola

Waise hi aawaaz aayi darwaaza khulne ki jab usne darwaaza khola toh jo usne dekha aur sabne dekha unke toh maano hosh udd se gaye sab ki saas kuch pal ke liye band ho gayi thi sab itne darr gaye the ki kuch bhi nahi bol paa raha tha koi.

Unhone dekha ki waha par ..................



































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