Hi!
For new readers, I know for a fact that you hated Kal so much, or maybe a bit. Because honestly he has no character development for 7 years. I admit that and I'm not going to change that. That's why I wrote "Until You Say It" with Yshara having the best lover fit for her because of Kal's poor decisions. If you don't want to read it, it's okay. I understand. I'm trying to improve. Actually medyo nahihiya ako sa mga nagbabasa nito ngayon. This wasn't my best and I'm sorry if this disappointed you but I really learn from this, so I'm keeping it this way.
But still thank you for reaching the epilogue of this story! I know I'm not that much of great writer but thank you for giving the chance to grow. Hindi ganoon ka-pulido sa tingin ko, but I gave my best to write this one. My characters are all flawed and they make decisions poorly but I hope you still love them despite that. I appreciate your comments, for taking time to read my story. I will do better in my next stories.
If you still think I can do better you can check the story of their daughter "Until You Say It. A refreshing one and not as heavy as this.
If you'd like to move forward from them and if you still believe I can do better in writing. I have an ongoing story entitled "Closer Into You" . You might want to check it out.
Again, thank you so much for coming this far. All the love 🫶🏻💓
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