[Paalala lang po. Hindi po ako perpekto. Binabase ko po ang pagcritic ng mga stories niyo sa nalalaman ko at gusto ko lang maging honest sa inyo. Now, if hindi po kayo kontento, wala na po akong magagawa doon.]
TITLE: She’s the Real Challenge
Written by: mr_cuddles
➡️You have a simple yet unique title and it is really interesting.
COVER:
➡️Para sa’kin, it’s kinda cute. I like its simplicity and it really catches my attention.
NARRATION:
➡️The narration of the story is quite good and it is really clean. You used English language most of the time and the flow of the story is indeed unexpected and unpredictable. Also, the way you use the third person POV is great. The emotions of every characters are visible and it is really interesting to read. I just don’t know why you still have a few followers when you write a great stories.
TECHNICALITIES:
➡️So far, I only noticed small technicalities. May konting wrong grammars lang akong napansin but I know, it can still be edited.
OVERVIEW:
➡️This story is great. Kung ako ang tatanungin, I can level this story as one of those stories written by some popular authors. It is well-written and I can say that you will be a great writer.
Quote from Shee: “Maybe it’s not your time today but someday, it will be.”
BINABASA MO ANG
Critique Station 2020
Non-FictionDo you need someone to read your story and someone who can give an honest opinions about your work? Advices for improvements? You're in the right station! ACTIVE (every weekends): [✔] March 2020 [] April 2020 [] May 2020
