[Paalala lang po. Hindi po ako perpekto. Binabase ko po ang pagcritic ng mga stories niyo sa nalalaman ko at gusto ko lang maging honest sa inyo. Now, if hindi po kayo kontento, wala na po akong magagawa doon.]
TITLE: Comfort of Darkness
Written by: Glamcattt
➡️The title somehow gives me a mysterious effect to the point na nakaka-curious siya at nakakaintriga kung bakit naging comfort zone ng bida ang darkness.
COVER:
➡️The picture that you used is okay and fits to the theme of the story. The only problem is, yung paglagay mo ng title nito. Parang sobrang laki kasi ng gap ng mga ito. If possible po ay medyo paliitin niyo po yung gaps then move it lower and it will be okay.
NARRATION:
➡️Another good masterpiece. That's what I can say. Para akong nagbabasa ng story ni miss jonaxx and at the same time ng author na si heartlessnostalgia. Yun ang naramdaman kong vibe while reading this. As in!
TECHNICALITIES:
➡️ So far, kaunti lang naman. Minsan sa nasosobrahan ang paglalagay mo ng kuwit (,) na puwede namang gamitin ang tuldok (.). Minsan, nakakagulat din ang biglang pagsulpot ng mga English words sa mga sentence na almost ay in Filipino kaya sometimes nagmumukha itong conyo.
OVERVIEW:
➡️This story is good! Hindi predictable ang mga sumusunod na pangayayari and very fascinating.
Quote from Shee: “Even the darkness has its fairy-tale side that you'll surely love.”
BINABASA MO ANG
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