My shitty object cocainebook :/

my first ever crappy writing

Ok so yall remember my firsst chapter?

a shit fireoiny story?

well my REAL first writing was a terrible apocalypse scenario excerpt 

here it is:

The infected was getting through, Leafy and Pin were holding them back and trying as hard as they possibly could. Firey was worried for them, and everyone still out there, but right now his main priority was Coiny. Coiny had coward behind him in fear, almost on the verge of tears. Firey was comforting him gently as he heard a gun cock back. Needle was reloading a pistol, as a zombie was making its way through the fence. She gunned it down in 3 loud bangs, which only terrified Coiny more. He clung onto Firey, making him blush a little cotton candy pink. "Its okay, Coiny.. We'll make it through this together.." His soothing words felt calming as they went through Coiny's head, until a loud growl was heard. Firey turned around to a green, sloppy and melted infected walked though. "Gelatin" Firey thought. Gelatin walked towards Cake and Loser, mostly towards Cake. Once he was close enough, he lunged towards the fearful dessert. But Loser grabbed hold of Needle's pistol and screamed, "DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT TOUCHING HIM!" and shot him down. "Wow, he pissed him off." Firey thought. Coiny gripped harder onto firey," I-Im scared.." he whispered. "Its okay, i promise.. We'll make it out alive and well." Coiny hugged him, making Firey blush a sweet raspberry pink. He hugged back reassuringly, making Coiny relax and melt into the hug. He sighed," Thanks.." He smiled. "We need to get moving soon, this gate won't hold very much longer!" Pin yelled worriedly. "Then we should keep running into the forest," said Clock. Coiny and Firey released from the hug.

"Okay, lets go."

im so proud of past me for making loser a badass

a week after i made it i edited it

it first said "loser grabbed needles gun like a badass" and omm

beace pros