Divergent Her

Chapter 11

Tris POV:

The next day Will and I are walking around alone. We haven't had much time alone, but Al and Christina are still sleeping. "This is going to sound weird, but I wish we din't have they day off today." I nod "We could go visit him" suggests Will "But what would we say? I didn't know you that well, but I'm sorry that you go stabbed in the eye?" It isn't funny and I know that, but I laugh anyway that way I don't cry. "Sorry" I say "But it's just so ridiculous." 

As we laugh for a minute I see Four it looks like he was walking towards us, but turned around. I see him walk away.

I say seriously "The most ridiculous part is, in any other faction it would be brave of us to tell someone what happened. But her in Dauntless.. bravery won't do us any good." "Have you ever read the faction manifestos?" Will asks. "You have?" I frown at him and then I remember that this is the same person who memorized the map of the city for fun. "Oh of course you have, Never mind" "One of the lines that I remember from the Dauntless Manifestos 'We belive in ordinary acts of bravery, in the courage that drives one person to stand up for another.'"

He doesn't need to say anything else that is what I wish Dauntless was like. The fun times here I see a faction worth saving. Maybe we can make it brave and honorable again."

Let's go to the cafeteria and eat cake," Will says. "Okay,"I say.  As we walk through the pit I think about what will said and how it's a beautiful thought."

When we get to the dormitory Edward's bunk is stripped clean and so is Myra's. I asked what happened and Christina tells me that they left. Edward lost his eye and Myra couldn't stand the thought of being here without him and she was going to get cut anyway.....

Four POV: 

I was in the control room. It wasn't in there because it's not my time to work, but I wanted to see where Tris is and what she's doing. I see her in the pit with Will. I feel a bit of jealousy, but she doesn't seem to busy. I decide I should go and talk to her.

I get down there and Will and her are laughing and talking so I turn and start to walk away. I'm sure she saw me, but I don't care I know she doesn't like me and I'm not going to try and convince her to like me.  

Later Zeke invites me to go zip lining with them and normally I wouldn't go, but I heard that Uriah saw Tris on the way and invited her. I decide to go so maybe we can talk. When I walk down the train I see her talking with Uriah. Then the train comes we get in and I see Uriah grab Tris's arm steadying her in the train. I wish that it was me with her. 

They are both sitting together and I hear them talking. I wish I could be around her and we talk like that. Do I still have feeling for Lauren though? I couldn't be around Tris if I still cared about Lauren I would hurt her and me, so maybe I can't be around her right now. Dang, why didn't I think about this before I came. I hate heights and now I have to do this. I'm sitting and I zone out while Zeke talks to me because I'm listening to Tris's conversation.

She and Shauna are talking and Shauna and I are good friends. Shauna extends her hand to Tris and says "I'm Shauna. Tris shakes her hand and you can tell it's unnatural for her as it is for me. "I'm-" she starts to say. Shauna interrupts though and says "I know who you are, You're the Stiff. Four told me about you." 

No Shauna why would you tell her that. Especially when I'm right her. "Oh? What did he say?" If i wasn't pay enough attention and looking very close I wouldn't have been able to see her blush a little bit. Oh Tris... "He said you were a Stiff. Why do you ask?" Yeah why did you? "If my instructor was talking about me I want to know what he was saying." She says firmly. Oh well never mind. "Do you know him well," she asks Shauna. "Everyone knows Four, We were initiates together. I was bad at fighting, so he taught me every night after everyone was asleep." Her expression become serious "Nice of him"

Shauna walks away and Tris looks a little angry not very much though. Is she mad that I called her a Stiff or because Shauna talked about me and her hanging out and me being nice to her I guess to Tris I don't appear nice to her because of me being her instructor and what happened with her and Lauren...

________________________________________________________________________________

Hoped you enjoyed this Chapter I will be doing the zip line next chapter because I didn't want to make this one too long. This was a little different because in the original Four doesn't go zip lining. 

Should this book go farther then divergent and should it have the war or it's own story plot?

Comment your opinions and don't forget to vote!

-Addison