OC Reviews and Advice No One Asked for

Introduction/Rules

Hey everybody. My name's Venus. Of course that's not my real name, because if any of my IRL friends found out that I unironically have an account on Wattpad, I would... god I don't know what I would do. Probably just die. Anyways I'll be reviewing your OCs because quarantine is making me do crazy things out of boredom. 

And if there's anything worse than COVID-19, it's bad writing. And it's EVERYWHERE on Wattpad. So I'll also be writing chapters with shitty writing advice that will maybe help. Probably not, but might as well try.

So anyways, here's a few ground rules for you sluts, please read em all:

1.) If there's any triggering content in your character's profile, such as abuse, assault, rape, self harm, suicide, mental health, homophobia, violence, etc, please include an appropriate warning. Thank you.

2.) If I don't like your OC or if I advise you to change something, you don't have to listen to my opinion. Just please don't get super mad at me. Thank you.

3.) Be respectful to other people's characters! I'm the asshole here, not y'all.

4.) Don't rush me to finish your review. It'll just annoy me. 

5.) Voting isn't required, but it is greatly appreciated ;)

6.) If you think of my criticism is wrong or unfair, please tell me. I'm always looking to improve.

7.) Please only submit your characters in the comment section, or comment a link to one of your Wattpad stories with the form. Please keep submissions in a single comment thread.

8.) Please submit no more than two characters at once. You may submit or resubmit characters to me as many times as you want, but please wait your turn.

9.) If you improve your character after my critique and want an updated review, I'd be more than happy to take another look.

10.) Comment the password, "Okie Dokie", If you've read all these rules.

11.) Payment for a review is feet pics

12.) Lmao jk

Mmkay that's all, you can proceed to the rules and forms now if you still wanna submit your character to me.