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Taking Third Place we have... A TIE!
Conquered by: SirEllious
Plot/Development : 10 Points
The plot is interesting. I really enjoyed it.
Characters/Character Development: 10 Points
The main character stands out, and has great development.
Diction: 10 Points
The word choice paints an excellent picture!
Grammar/Detail/Description: 8Points
Present and past tense could use a little work, not too much. The author uses past tense mostly, but a few present tense words were thrown in there.
Conflict/Character Struggles: 10 Points
The story develops nicely and has amazing potential. I like how she's a badass but still needs to dress pretty because she's a princess.
Title and novel summery: 10 Points
Definitely draws me in.
Creativity/originality: 10 Points
I love this story! I think it is very creative and original.
Cover: 10 points
I like the image on the cover, not so much where the title is placed and the font, but that's my opinion.
Review: I love this story! The only let down was a few little past and present tenses. If you are writing in past tense, be careful that the present tense words don't creep in here and there. It's an easy thing to do!
Total Score: 78/80!
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An Abrupt Requital by: WriteWithBeth
Plot/Development : 10 Points
The plot is good, I like that it starts the action straight away and in a news paper form.
Characters/Character Development: 10 Points
I'd love to know how she was before. The main character is great!
Diction: 10 Points
I liked the use of the newspaper clippings at the start, as much as it was a little strange to read, I found it provided a lot of information.
Grammar/Detail/Description: 10 Points
No issues with any of it. It was great.
Conflict/Character Struggles: 10 Points
So much conflict and so much growth for a character who has lost her hearing and is disfigured.
Title and novel summery: 10 Points
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The Chaos Awards 8!
Non-FictionWelcome to The Chaos Awards 8! I hope we can all have another great contest together! Feel free to participate if this interests you! All information you'll need is inside! Please message me directly with another further questions!
