a delicious dish is made up of fresh ingredients and a well-thought-out recipe, right?
welcome to 'recipe'! wherein chef mae carefully analyzes the recipe of your preferred dish to help you make it more delectable and pleasant to eat!
in other words...
-your title fits your story perfectly and will definitely intrigue future readers!
cover! (5/5)
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-i usually don't prefer covers that are like 'collages' but yours is an exception! i love how it connects with your story while still looking simple yet pretty!
description! (8/10)
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-you did a great job with writing your description! it doesn't give out too much information but it leaves the readers curious.
-although i do notice some grammatical errors and i'll show you.
-'these four teenagers are about to embark on a journey of a lifetime.' i think that it sounds smoother that way, the comma and 'they' seems sorta unnecessary and causes an abrupt stop. what i mean is 'these four teenagers *stop* they're about to-' like it just appears abrupt as i said.
