Likhe Jo Khat Tujhe (review book)

• Gensis- The Story Retold

Author: RuhikaBhattacharj0

Reviewer: sumani3456

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Amplify (cover)

The cover is nice. But it could be fascinating if you add both Prince and Princess. According to the description of the characters of princess and prince like you can add princess with violet color eyes and prince with a sword.

Accent (title)

The title of the story is good. It suits the story. Genesis means beginning of a new age and here in the Story you have showed that there is starting of something new

Crescendo (blurb)

The blurb of the story shows how it is going to proceed further and it grabs readers attention first. Here the blurb of the story is good and eye-catching.

Hook (prologue)

It is another thing which grabs readers attention and keeps them hooked to the story till the end. Here the prologue is interesting.

Ballad (plot)

The plot of the story is good. This story revolves around the prince and princess mostly as they are going to bring some changes in future. Mainly princess, As the story shows that she is more powerful and then next after Prince and princess meet each other how their lives are going to change

Ensemble (characters)

Here in this story, the main characters are Priestess Meritheka, King Akhetaten, Queen Nefertiti, Princess Ankhesenpaaten and her sisters, Prince Ankh, Prince Ankh's Father Amenhokp, Mother Sitamun, Sister Beket. But I think you have to mention the name of Prince as you have kept a nickname here and as role of the prince is also important here I feel you have mention Prince name too in this story.

Avant Gard (storyline)

The storyline is good. It shows how powerful princess is and how she is going to change her own fate and bring new changes. Later how Prince and princess meet each other and create a new beginning.

Cantabile (grammar)

The grammar should be taken care of. There are some mistakes here and there.

Dolce (opinion)

I have read the entire 3 chapters of the Story .it is good. The
cover and grammar structure should be taken care of expect that everything is good. You have done a nice job. I hope this review helps you. Best of Luck!

Thank you
Sumani
(Reviewer, FMC)

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