Likhe Jo Khat Tujhe (review book)

• Laal Ishq

Writer: pahul_gpk

Reviewer: neha_satakshi

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Amplify(Cover)

The cover goes exactly with what the matter is about and the way that the blood spots are shown is nice. The OS is about Laal Ishq which is actually depicting the menstrual blood. Maybe you can show a girl in the backdrop. I think you have not taken the help of any graphic designer. So I will suggest you to ask some designer to design your cover. It will be more attractive. 

Accent (Title)

You have chosen a very apt title for your OS- Laal Ishq. Although I first thought that it would be some romance or thriller love story. But this came as a surprise for me when I read the blurb. Here your motive is to showcase the love for a particular Red- Menstruation Blood. And that was amazing. 

Crescendo (Blurb) 

My first impression, to be honest, after seeing the cover and title was that the story will be about some love story. But girl, you just have the surprise in the blurb itself and there you have got the attention of your reader. The blurb you wrote was to the point. And showed about what exactly the book will be about. From the description and significance of the color RED in general to the Misconception about it when it's from a girl's menstruation time is beautifully written.

Ballad (Plot)

First of all, I would appreciate your thought about writing your first story on Wattpad with something so significant in a woman's life but still considered as a taboo for society. The entire concept about Periods, it's misconceptions, and myths which you have clearly shown in your work is commendable. It's very well written. It also gives us a social message that we should take it in a more normal way because it is a normal thing.

Avant Grad (Storyline)

This was not a story but can be taken as an article. It felt that you have done a lot of research work on this which was nice. The start of it with all those lines was just intriguing. You have shown the myths surrounding periods and their actual scientific reasons which maybe most of us also didn't know. It was well written. From the start till the end you have covered all the points which we girls face in our day to day life and this is what makes it more connective. In the end, you also talked about your thinking earlier about this along with how it changed. It's about how we should also love this RED, because once we start doing so, so will the society. There the title of the write-up is justified.

Cantabile (Grammar)

Your command over English, as well as Hindi, is really good. You have written it well. From the start of describing the different occasions, the color RED is used to how it is considered impure when secreted from a woman's body.

Dolce (Reviewer opinion) 

I loved your OS. It is an eye-opener for many. Not only for men but also women as well. This taboo will only be broken when we start talking about it in general. For a first-time writer, you did a fabulous job. A new cover is all I think you need in this. And you are good to go. I wish to read more of your writings. 

Hope my review was a bit of your help.Good luck. 

With love,

Neha,

(REVIEWER, FMC)

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