Likhe Jo Khat Tujhe (review book)

• How I Suffered For My Sanity

Reviewer: __ThelazyAatma

Author: Queen_of_life_Heba

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Amplify (Cover)

The cover could've been much better. My suggestion is to change your cover and write your name over to the top in big letters so that it could be visible. That would make the cover look more appealing.

Downbeat (Title)

The title was not suitable. I feel the title could have been much better. You had written so many poems with different topics but your title is " How I suffered for my sanity " like the whole book has only one topic that how the girl suffered so much for proving her innocence and sanity. And that's not appropriate. So I suggest, you should think of a different title.

Crescendo (Blurb)

The blurb was fine just fine. You don't need to use ellipses in your blurb. You could've made it more hooking. You should edit your blurb.

Harmony (mood)

You.Have.Talent.

Your poems were very captivating and alluring. I like your poems and I can relate to it so much. It drew me in with the first sentences and was beautifully done to high expectations! You grip your readers in and keep the flow steady sometimes using a rhyme which really makes it enjoyable! But there is always room for improvement, right? The problem with your poetry is that it does not contain those reflexive advanced words which most of the poems include. You write in a simple style, whereas it should be left alone. Try to add some mystery to the poems.

I really felt the pain, happiness, and every emotion as I kept on reading your poems. And you did a great job here.

Cantabile (Grammar)

You need to work on grammar. The book has lots of mistakes and needs heavy editing. And could have some more exclamation or danger. The reading level is a little lower.

Vocal ( Speaker)

You have many parts in your book and I can't explain everything in this part. But your book explained the harsh reality of this society and I totally loved it. Your theme and characters are perfect. But you can make your poem lengthy. As they are too short. You portrayed your emotions very well.

Dolce ( Reviewer's opinion) 

I suggest you work on the above mistakes. You have the talent and potential to be an incredible poet. Keep up the good work! Make sure to double-check your work and stay inspired, you have intense talent. 💙🌻

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