Likhe Jo Khat Tujhe (review book)

• MANAN: Devil's Lover

Author: its-priyaanka

Reviewer: angel_champ
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Amplify (cover):

The cover is the first thing that attracts a reader to check the book. You have done a good job with the cover. Its font and color used are nice. But I feel you need to change the pics of Manan. According to story Nandini is a serious character and Manik is a bubbly character. The only thing you need to change in the cover is the pics.

Accent (Title):

Your title is different and interesting. Till now I did not come across a Manan fanfic with this name 'Devil's lover' is different is what I felt.

Crescendo (Blurb):

From my POV I did not find it new. All the stories with dark concepts have similar types of blurb. I think you could have highlighted some situations or conversations between leads without revealing who they were.

Hook (Prologue):

You did not add any prologue to the story. The prologue would help the reader to know or guess the outline of a story. I felt you could add part 1 of your story as prologue excluding the revelation of Nandini Murthy.

Ballad (Plot):

Sorry dear, but till the last chapter, you updated I did not find it any different plot. It is like a routine with Nandini having past and coming across her family and all. But what highlights your story is your narration and your way of writing it. It really did impress me. And some highlighting words u write in between explaining the character's situation is a plus point too. I hope you do have a very interesting past to reveal. I did not get one thing dear how come Nandini's parents or Manik's parents did not notice NM in their kid's marriage?

Ensemble (Characters):

You have molded Manik, Nandini, and Madhyam's character beautifully. But you need to concentrate on other characters too. Nandini's brothers, parents, Manik parents, and all must be taken care of.

Cantabile (Grammar):

There is nothing to correct in your grammar dear. You are doing good.

Dolce (Opinion):

Dear your way of writing keeps the readers intact so keep doing the same. I really liked the way u are narrating. Just try to concentrate and mold other characters too. I hope I did not offend you with my review. I am sure your story would reach more readers soon. Best of Luck!

~Angel
Reviewer, FMC

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