Likhe Jo Khat Tujhe (review book)

• Twins' Secret

Author: dramaqueen_Nahar

Reviewer: satchitanandini

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Amplify (Cover)

The cover is apt. Manik and Parth's expressions are also apt. The cover maker's name isn't clear and so is yours. Also, twins are plural. So the title is supposed to be "Twins' Secret". Even though the S is the same the apostrophe has to come after the S and not before it.

Accent (Title)

The title is intriguing. It is apt for the story. The title hinted at the mystery involved in the story. So good job with the title.

Crescendo (Blurb)

The blurb could have been much better. It just explained the situation. You could've made it more hooking owing to the mystery in your story. It didn't push me to press the read button.

Hook (Prologue)

The prologue was good. It kept the mystery of the book. The tense situation was kept up. Good job with it.

Ballad (Storyline)

The storyline is unique. This is the first time I'm reading a plot like this. You've maintained your storyline well. It's really intriguing and unique. It's written in a diary form. Now I only have one question. It's Parth's diary and he has written his experience. How did he get to know the exact drunk scene between Manik and Nandini? As of now, there is no revelation regarding this.

Ensemble

The casting wasn't new except a few changes in Manik's characterization and Parth. For a change, Nyonika isn't a vamp. Parth and Manik are both falling for one girl that's Nandini. Here the only glitch was Parth's emotions towards Nandini weren't shown much except when she would shed tears. Manik is fighting with Nandini because of Parth and at the same time falling for her. Even his emotions regarding love (except for staring) can be shown. The story is now developed so, should the portrayal of emotions.

Avant-Garde

The storyline is unique. Though two brothers (twins) falling for the same girl and one death isn't new, your story has been portrayed mystery on the death of one of the twins, Parth. That's what is making the story unique.

Cantabile

You need to work on grammar. Many sentences need reconstruction. Do give English translation for Hindi. The book has lots of mistakes and needs heavy editing. The book is in Hinglish but even the Hindi dialogues have spelling errors.

Example: Matarani tumhara jasa bhai kisi ko na da

Corrected: Matarani tumhare jaise bhai kisiko na de.

There are many errors like this. So do correct it.

Dolce

See to the above-mentioned points and work on them. The storyline is nice. Your grammar and spelling need a check so work on it. Else, you're good to go.

I hope this review has helped you. Good luck!

Love,

Satchita Nandini.

(Reviewer, FMC)

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