Likhe Jo Khat Tujhe (review book)

• Forced Marriage

Author: ManNi_lover

Reviewer: sumani3456

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Amplify(cover)

The cover is good and attractive. It suits the story.

Accent (title)

The title of the story is nice but not uncommon. I feel you have to make slight changes in the title as I feel it is not going well with the story.

Crescendo (blurb)

The blurb of the story means it shows how the story is going to proceed further. Here the blurb of the story is interesting and eye-catching.

Hook (prologue)

It is the thing that grabs the reader's attention and gets them hooked to the story until the end. Here the prologue of the story is good and it makes the reader peep in the story and wants to know more.

Ballad (plot)

The plot of the story is good. In this, the story revolves around the main characters that are Manik and Nandini. How Manik is forced to marry Nandini by his family. How he is going to treat her and whether he is going to develop feelings towards her or not? How Nandini is going to adjust with him?

Ensemble (characters)

Here the main characters of the story are Manik, Nandini, Dhruv, Aliya, Mr. and Mrs. Malhotra, Navya, Cabir, Nandini parents, and Mukthi. The character sketch is good but I feel you have to mention about Mr. Malhotra a little as he is Manik father and in character sketch, you have mentioned about Mukthi character but in the story, you didn't mention about Mukthi so I feel you have to mention about her too in further chapters of the story.

Avant Gard (storyline)

The storyline is good.It revolves around Manik and Nandini. How Nandini has married Manik for her parents and how Manik is forced to marry Nandini by his parents and how he is going to treat her and whether they are going to develop feelings towards each other or not.

Cantabile (grammar)

The grammar should be taken care of. There are some grammatical mistakes here and there.

Dolce(opinion)

I have read the entire 28 chapters and enjoyed reading it. The grammar should be taken care of and in character sketch I feel you have to make some changes other than that everything is fine. You have done a nice job.

I hope this review helps you. All the best.

Thank you ,
Sumani (Reviewer,FMC)

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