Likhe Jo Khat Tujhe (review book)

• Aitraaz

Reviewer: _khusiyaan_

Author: Psr1403

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Amplify (cover)

The cover is too good perfectly fit for the story it's simplified main focus on Sameer because he was the victim by Sunaina's sexual needs but it's light little darker will be good in Sunaina's side Sunaina is evil so her side should look dark compared to others. Otherwise, it's perfect.

Accent (title)

Aitraaz, nice name and different too, but it's the same as the movie Aitraz of Akshay Kumar, Kareena Kapoor, and Priyanka Chopra. I think you should name its something else using your creative mind to it. So that the story has your creative essence. 

Crescendo (blurb)

An interesting and attract more people in a suspicious way even it's fighting for justice against a sexual needy girl vs a wife to protect her husband. It shows what is wrong is wrong.

Hook (prologue)

The prologue is good as it shows what is going further going to happen in the story.  A guy is stopping a girl to do anything with him bcoz he is married and the girl wants him anyhow when he denies she wanted to take revenge but it's exactly the same as the movie so I doubt those who see the movie didn't get interested to read further.

Balad (plot)

Interesting but not different or unique, because till the point where I read your story resembles the movie in every way. 

Ensemble (character)

A character sketch is ok because it takes prologue too so character sketch is small and showing everything but a little mistake here, you didn't show who is Sunaina's current husband?

Avant Grad (storyline )

Till now I didn't get interested because everything is same as a movie for me every words scene are matching so I don't think those who see this movie getting attracted towards your story otherwise those who didn't see the movie it's really amazing concept but there is no your touch to the story. You have 50-50 chances to get reds for your story.

Cantabile (grammar)

You used both language Hindi as well as English. So for those who didn't know Hindi,  English translation is a must for them, please add translations too in a bracket with every sentence.

Dolce (reviewer opinion)

You need to change the name as it's the same as the movie even concept are exactly the same no difference in it so it's fewer chances to get readers attractive towards your story.

Second: Use translation with ever Hindi sentence it's easy to understand readers both language.

Third: Make it something interesting to get more readers. Something different from the actual story because its same to same movie copied every sentence, dialogues everything. if I make it little easier, you have copied the as it is from the movie, which for one isn't right because that's the part of plagiarism, two you aren't giving anything new to your readers and three your imagination wast used anywhere from the title of your book to the plot and storyline everything was the same. 

Dear, taking inspiration from a movie is another thing, and copying it as it how it was formed is totally different level's plagiarism. I would suggest you should take down your story for time being and make it your way adding your idea, you can keep the same plot as the movie, but change the storyline like their meet Sameer and Naina's meet, Sunina can be Naina's sister who is Us returned and has her eye on her sister's husband. (Husband) this can be your storyline. 

You need to act fast before anyone complaints about your book. 

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