𝐒𝐚𝐦𝐚𝐢𝐧𝐚 𝐅𝐚𝐧𝐟𝐢𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 𝐀𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐝𝐬

TS/FS Results-First Round

Here are the results of TS and FS

Thank you __wandering__ and __rosefreckles__ for judging this category for our contest.

1)Tashan Wala Love by YUDKBH_MUSINGS

Title: 3/5 (Title is nice but doesn't suit that well with the
storyline.)

Cover: 4/5 (Could have been little more attractive
though the pictures used were relevant to the scenes
of the story.)

Blurb: 5.5/10 (Firstly, I guess the description wasn't complete and there were errors in that too. Secondly,the description could have been more attractive and audience appealing. As we know, a reader first reads the description then the book. If description isn't appealing toh kaise koi padhega )

Grammar and spelling: 4/10 (Filled with grammatical errors)

Originality of plot or how unique is it: 10/20 (Originality toh nahi hai, it is mainly the same sequence of the
show but the events taking place is different. So I give 10 for the scenes shown.)

Characterisation: 9/10 (Characters' introduction could have been little more elaborative, but never mind. The characterisation was good. )

Flow: 7/10 ( The scenes moved really fast and there were no elaboration about what happened. Detailing
was missing. According to me, the writer just wanted to end it ASAP and didn't put adequate effort on
content.)

Plot and character development: 11/20 (As I mentioned earlier, the speed of the story was quite
high. Things happened in just a blink, there was no time given to the reader to sync in what happened. The story
was quite confusing and very fast moving.)

Overall: 8.5/10

A short review:: I don't mind having the story as FS, the scene chosen couldn't have contented more chapters too. But in those 4 to 5 chapters also, one can show
many things. You can give longer updates but good and
clarified content. The short stories and the OS, TS and
FS aren't meant to be short but quite lengthy so that in less chapters you get the same detailing as that of the
longer ones.
I appreciate the effort and idea.
But I don't find any solid reason to accept the book.

So this book is Not Accepted.

2)Adhoore se Hum by RishikaShrivastava

Title: 5/5 (Perfect for the storyline)

Cover: 5/5 ( A cover should be a pictorial representation of the story. The cover has shown Samaina's picture which relates to the story as they meet in the story soon.)

Blurb: 9/10 (Though the description doesn't have any information about the story but the writer specified that
it can be two shot or three shot. She didn't create any confusion or give any false information to the reader.)

Grammar and spelling: 10/10 (There weren't any spelling error exactly. While u type sometimes u do fumble with the typos. So there were typoerror and don't spelling mistakes.)

Originality of plot or how unique is it: 18.5/20 ( Though the situation where Naina lived was not so similar with
show. There were some extracts which resembles of show. But that can be neglected, the idea of in-laws making their daughter in-law comfortable and teach her to live for herself too, has been used in some other stories too.Nevertheless the writer had her own ideas applied and
made the story quite different from the other ones.)

Characterisation: 9/10 ( The way the characters were defined and their roles were well played. Though
character's traits could have been described little more with some more scenes or sequences, but that's not an
issue.)