𝐒𝐚𝐦𝐚𝐢𝐧𝐚 𝐅𝐚𝐧𝐟𝐢𝐜𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 𝐀𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐝𝐬

LS(Long Stories)-First Round Results

Thank you aakritisinghh02 ,TheChocolateGirlx and Samaina_loverzz for judging this categories.

1)Waqt ne kiya kya haseen sitam by Doraashi

Title:3/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:8/10
Grammar and spelling :10/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :18/20
Characterisation:9/10
Flow:10/10
Plot and character development :18/20
Overall:9/10

A short review:
Title seems a bit long and too common. Cover is nice but by adding double exposures it can be made eye catchy. Add some eye catching description too. Work on grammatical errors and I noticed in your every book you used to write long paragraphs.You can change that and break long paragraphs into short ones. Create some suspense and mystery to make readers curious, it also helps them to keep interested in story.

So this story is Not Accepted.

2)Expectedly unexpected by MagicalMe207

Title:5/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:10/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :20/20
Characterisation:10/10
Flow:10/10
Plot and character development :18/20
Overall:10/10

A short review:
Everything in the book is perfect but your cover is too simple.It can be more presentable. There are some grammatical mistakes. Your starting plot is unique but seems to be a little common later. The story's catch, it's pace with time is too good. Nice, keep going.

So this story is Accepted.

3)Love in Mt.Abu by MagicalMe207

Title:4/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:9/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :19/20
Characterisation:10/10
Flow:10/10
Plot and character development :20/20
Overall:10/10
A short review:
Except your title and cover,your storyline is great. Work on cover it as it seems too simple. Title coupd have been more catchy one. Description is nice. Your stoey is written beautifully but you need to work on some grammartical errors. Proofread once and also edit the story. Good job.

So this story is Accepted.

4)Aashique phirse by @Doraashi

Title:4/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:9/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :19/20
Characterisation:10/10
Flow:9/10
Plot and character development :19/20
Overall:10/10
A short review:

Title is good.Cover could have been more presentable and also can add author's name in it. Add little more description so that readers could get idea of the plot. You can cut down long paragraphs into short one. You should do some editing at few places. Make it a bit more mysterious to make readers curious. Overall your work is great. Keep going.

Accepted.

5)Love Modernized by Yudkbhffslove

Title:4/5
Cover:5/5
Blurb:8/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :19/20
Characterisation:8/10
Flow:8/10
Plot and character development :17/20
Overall:9/10

A short review:

Book is well written but needs some editing work.Proofread it once. Put space between two character's dialogue also the pace is too high. You can slow your storyline pace.

Accepted

6)While walking by shambhavisontakke