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Namaste! Aadab! Sat Sri Akaal!
Welcome to the First ever Awards exclusively conducted for Samaina!
Yeh jodi woh thi jisne "Pehla" shabd ke mehtva aur khoobsurati ko bakhubi darshaaya. Samaina's "Firsts" have been the h...
From the Cover, to the Title and Blurb; from the Concept and Storyline, to the Plot constructed, from the Beginning of the story, to the End of it, which even marked the end of 'The Stain'! It was a perfect blend of each and every requirement of a Perfect Story. Though, in the beginning, the concept looks a little common, but the way the story proceeds and the way each and every scene is brought out, is highly commendable. The dialogues were also written very well. The area you need to work upon is the usage of punctuation marks. The comma (,) was missing at a no. of places. Also, try to use semicolon (;) to depict the emotions, gaps and intensity, instead of (...) which though helps in the perfect description of the scene but is quite common, as well as it looked unnecessary at most of the places.But all in all, it was a perfect piece which deserves a good bunch of applause. Though, a simple one, but has the power to leave a very strong impression on a reader's mind. Congratulations! Keep Writing! All the Best!
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Beginning with a very unique Title and a perfect Blurb, it all went very smooth. A good Cover is something I found to be missing, which could not attract at the first sight. However, the Blurb and the Title compensated for that; but make sure to look into this. A very nice plot with an amazing flow of events. The way the story proceeded and the way it ended, was a total superhit. Just look into the slight grammatical errors. Rest everything was written very beautifully, worth bringing a smile on the saddest of face. Congratulations! Keep Writing! All the Best!
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3rd POSITION: KAASH MAIN HOTA by Doraashi Congratulations! Keep Writing! All the Best!
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RUNNER-UP: NANU AUR NAINA by RishikaShrivastava Congratulations! Keep Writing! All the Best!
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