Here are the results of the First Round of SS (Short Stories).
Thankyou sunshine-in-disguise and CrystalPandit for judging the nominated books of SS category.
*Dear contestants please do follow your judge,else your book will be disqualified.*
1)Book :- Born To Save Us by chocolategirlj26
Title :- 3.5/5
(Could have been better)
Cover :- 3/5
(The fonts and colors are not appropriate. It could have been better.)
Blurb :- 7/10
(Could have been better.)
Grammar & Spelling :- 5/10
(In the first chapter 9th line there were typos like '' Sameer who is busy in his smartphone mesmerized seeing her ''
Which should be ''Sameer who was busy in his smartphone got mesmerised seeing her ''
In the 20th line , there was spelling mistake . You have written ''chok'' there , which should be ''Chalk''.
There were much more typos , and grammar mistakes so i guess 5/10 is apt. )
Originality of Plot & uniqueness :- 15/20
(The plot could have been more unique.)
Flow :- 5/10
(Everything happened in a rush. Though its a short story but still you should have carried the story smoothly.)
Plot & Character Development :- 15/20
(Like I said earlier , everything happened in a rush so with the character development. And plot seems to be nice despite of few mistakes. )
Overall :- 6/10
(I think you should correct the mistakes . This book has the potential to be become a very good one . )
So this book is Not Accepted.
2)Book : Bachpan ke dost se lekar Jeevan Saathi tak by chocolategirlj26
Title : 4/5
(A bit too long )
Cover : 5/5
(Perfect.)
Blurb : 3/10
(Too short . You should have given some details.)
Grammar & Spelling : 8/10
(Minor mistakes are there . Mixing up of Past & Present Tense .No quotation comma rules . )
Originality and Uniqueness of Plot : 17/20
(Good Plot . But these types of plots are used widely so 17/20 is apt .)
Flow : 8/10
(In my opinion , it's a bit fast. )
Plot & Character Development : 18.5/20
(Plot is good . Problem is in with character development . It seems that the characters have no control on their characters themselves (funny i guess). Feelings seems to be rushing .)
Overall : 8/10
(The story is not completed yet so you can rectify your mistakes and make it a wonderful story. Its really good. )
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