dead girlpt1

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A woman with a foggy essence stood over her dead body. As she spoke with a dreading mourning voice that carries an affection," Hi my names Elena Radcliff and i died a moment ago. I was 30 and everything seemed to be going my way. I mean i just got married to a handsome gentlemen. He puts movie stars to shame lol. He's a tall awkward man with short brown hair and a smile that never seems to fade. With muscles up to heaven. Plus he has a thing down under that gave pleasure from up above. He left you feeling like you committed a sin. You know what i mean?"
Then she dropped her head and continued to talk with an empathetic but deep sorrow. With a hint of loving compromise," Well anyways enough of that. I was eating my breakfast. Did i tell you he cooked? Its the best but sometimes it had an awkward taste to it but i didnt complain. I mean he was cooking for me. Who could ask for a better person to have. He cooked,cleaned and even listened to all my problems. He was the perfect man. I forgot to tell you his name. Im sorry! forgive me! its been a long day. Well anywhoo. Its brad! Brad Hinkle.
After i ate his breakfast. He went to work and i was sitting there watching sands of our time. I kno i kno. Its the same thing on those dramas but with different people playing the part. Well I felt dizzy! got all lightheaded and my lil ticker gave out and now im standing above my body wondering what the hell is happening?
I have so many questions. where am i? Am i dead? I gotta be Right? There's no other explanations. My bodies not breathing but i am. Am i breathing? I cant be alive but everythings different. Seems that way anyway.

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She stood there in silence for hours pondering everything. life death all the things we all would ponder in a moment like that. She was alive amoment ago. a happy fresh faced girl with her long red hair and an upbeat attiude. She was beautiful. Everyone that saw her would say "when she entered a room she took the spotlight." It was the way you'd like to feel. that warm next to a fire coxy feeling. When she talked it was like you were the only one in the world that mattered. because to her. you did. Thats how caring people are and with that here we see two paramedics taking her body zipping it up, putting it in the ambulance as brad had called 911 not knowing what to do but did he?

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Three days passed Elena's stood in the house watching her ex husband following him. She felt a force where she couldnt leave him. it was pulling her toward him. strong and mighty she couldnt get away from it. This invisible force. It felt like they where anchored together. she loved him in every way immaginable. She wondered if that was it or something else. He was her world. Her universe.
All he had done was his regular routine in those three days . Get up, eat, shower, go to work, come home and go to bed but he never cried, no tears nor did he say much till that third night when Elena followed him to a club called " in the night" where she watched him pick up a petite blonde with junk in her trunk.

4
Elena stood in the house watching. as the pair came into the the maroon house that only had one floor with 4 rooms and a basement that had three rooms and a beat up shed out back. Where the doors always creaked and the smell seemed rotten but elena didnt notice much. she was to busy with life love and her career. plus she had just got pregnant. before she died. Now she stood in the entry way following them through the living room to the bedroom listening to there conversation.

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Elena spoke with anger as she watched," that rat bastard. Its only been three fuckin days. I did everything for him. I mean everything and now here he is with that little snatch trap. Oh hell no this aint flying. He's mine. Ill show this bitch."
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Elena lunged at the woman. She entered her body. then she felt the woman's emotions, seen her life unfold right before her eyes. Elena knew her favorite color, her family and every moment the woman had in her life. It seemed to be absorbed directly into elena's brain in a blink of an eye.
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Elena spoke with rage,"How could you! You bastard its only been 3 fucking days.
Brad stared dumbfoundedly at her but he replied calmly," what do you mean?"
Elena was outraged by this. Her soul was on fire. She yelled with a rampaging stomp of madness," how can you not know what i fucking mean! i died three fuckin days ago!"
Brad only got so far as he replied helplessly ,"ele-"
5c
In that moment she flew back from the body she inhabitated. Wondering what the hell had happened. As she watched this blonde mistress pass out right in front of her eyes. Elena had wanted to pass out too.  because she felt dizzy herself but what she saw next horrified her. For what she thought about the man who took her life and made it feel like a dream had now tainted it into a nightmare.
Brad grabbed the woman who was passed out and drug her to the room where elena and brad had made love and he raped the unconsious victim.
Elena screamed all night. An unbearable bellow. It blew out all the lights in the house cracking the windows in the room where she stood. It scared brad. he looked around and went back to sleep

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