Kidnapped

Chapter 1

Hey guys well I'm sorry I'm taking so long to update but I have three very good reasons:

1. Not many people are reading this, or voting or leaving commenst its not like its gonna kill you. Sorry if i'm sounding bitchy but its true.

2. My computer was acting retarted

3. School is becoming is beoming a real pain in the mickey ( l love minnie mouse better tho lol :D )

Anyways back to the story.

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Chapter 1

I combed my long dark red hair. My hair was actually really pretty and didn't look orange. Instead it was a sort of deep red that almost looked like blood but not really. Two shades lighter I would say. Making sure my hair looked alright I put my hairbrush down. Today I was going out with a couple of friends that included my brother Max. We were going to a fair that only came once a year. It was only here for a couple weeks during the summer.

Thank god! School had FINALLY ended I didn't think I could take any more with summer making the classrooms hot and stuffy. I looked over at the mirror and saw my reflection.

I of course had long red hair which I had inherited from my father. My eyes were a dark blue with long dark eyelashes framing them. Even though my eyebrows looked brown they had a reddish tint to them. I have small pink lips but they were plump and shaped nicely.

I quickly put on some mascara and eyeliner not a lot though. I applied some clear lip gloss. 'Perfect' I thought. Grabbing my cell phone and about 60 bucks I left my room. I frowned when I noticed Max wasn’t ready yet. And he said I took a long time.

Balling up my fist I banged on his bedroom door. "Max!" I yelled “hurry your butt up! The guys are almost here!"

"Hold your horses Miss Drama Queen!" I heard a muffle yell as he replied.

"Ass." I muttered.

"I heard that," I heard him through the door “at least I have one."

"What did you say?" I hissed.

“No need to be jealous sis," he said while laughing. I growled and kicked his stupid door.

"Melanie!" I heard someone say behind me. Mom. Shit. “What do you think you're doing young lading? If you keep acting like that I might not let you go to that cool fair of yours."

"Well, tell that son of yours to stop making fun of me!" I yelled. Mom raised an eyebrow at me. So I quickly said “I mean sorry mom I won’t do it again."

"Much better" my mom said smiling at me. I head Max laughing on the other side. I punched the door. Mom was staring at me incredulously.

"Sorry" I muttered looking at how clean the carpet looked.

"Max Mathews stop making fun of your sister," my mom said to Max "and hurry up your friends will be here shortly."

"Yeah Max" I said snickering. I ran away before either of them could say anything.

I watched TV for about half an hour before I heard a car honking outside. I turned the TV off.

"Bye mom!" I yelled over my shoulder “I love you!"

"Love you too sweetie," I heard her call back “take care!”

"Don't worry I will" I said “Max!"

"I'm coming!” said Max “what's the rush sis? I was ready the whole time."

I narrowed my eyes ay him “You little piece of-”

"Ah ah ahh" He said while shaking his index finger at me “watch your language young lady”

“Poop.” I finished.

"That's better!" said Max smiling. I pulled my arm back as if to punch him "MOM!"

"Stop fighting and go have fun already!" I heard my mom yell.

"Last one is a rotten egg!" yelled Max and ran out of the house “Bye mom, love you!''

"Bye!"

I shook my head at Max, and rolled my eyes at him "So immature."

Greeting my friends, I buckled my seatbelt on.

I smiled; this was going to be the best day ever.

Or so I thought.

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Well thats chapter 1. Im in a rush cuz my mom is all like gett of the damn computer. And she is scary when she gets mad. Anyway the picture over ther is Melanie ->