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Judge: IsabelBellaB
♤ BOOK TITLE: House of horrors by Aquarius839
Blurb / cover : 7/10
Title : 7/10
Use of language : 18/20
Characterization : 18/10
Plot : 16/20
Writing style : 18/20
Overall originality and creativity : 9/10
Total: 83/100
Review: The first few chapters really grab my attention. The words flow and make it very easy to read. You could still put a few more details in certain places to help with picturing where the characters are.
I found no mistakes regarding punctuation etc. I have some trouble figuring out the plot of the story though. The blurb contains to little information for me to make anything of it, but the cover is interesting which makes up for it.
♤ BOOK TITLE: Rise of the new olympians by akeila_agramunn
Blurb / cover : 8/10
Title : 8/10
Use of language : 6/20
Characterization : 7/10
Plot : 17/20
Writing style : 16/20
Overall originality and creativity : 9/10
Total: 81/100
REVIEW: The Story is a little hard to follow in the beginning, but after a few chapters it becomes very good. There are a lot of mistakes in some parts unfortunately.
I like the characters so far and the way you portray the girl as an actual teenager. I like the Blurb and the cover is very unique. This is a very unique story with a very interesting plot. I wish you the best of luck.
♤ BOOK TITLE: Ruth by cherrlynbloom
Blurb / cover : 8/10
Title : 5/10
Use of language : 17/20
Characterization : 8/10
Plot : 14/20
Writing style : 17/20
Overall originality and creativity : 7/10
Total: 76/100
Review: (not completely sure how this book fits into the paranormal category) I love the cover, it stands out very much.
The blurb is also very to the point and doesn't give to much away. The chapters were a little boring and most things repeated over a few, but there were some instances where something jumped out at me.
For me there's no clear picture of what the plot is and I'd like a few more details about where she is so that I can picture it more clearly. But your overall writing was good with not lot of mistakes.
♤ BOOK TITLE: Please the god by laynejodi
Blurb / cover : 5/10
Title : 9/10
Use of language : 17/20
Characterization : 4/10
Plot : 15/20
Writing style : 16/20
Overall originality and creativity : 9/10
Total: 75/100
Review: Reading the first few chapters are super confusing. It took me a while to figure out what was going on.
The chapters went by with very little information and I couldn't really get any characterization. There were a few grammar mistakes and sentence structure wasn't always great, but it was good nonetheless.
I have absolutely no clue what the plot is and the blurb didn't completely match the story I was reading. The story seems interesting though and I'd like to continue.
♤ BOOK TITLE: Incongruous by RichardPowell72
Blurb / cover : 7/10
Title : 7/10
Use of language : 11/20
Characterization : 15/10
Plot : 16/20
Writing style : 13/20
Overall originality and creativity : 15/10
Total: 68/100
Review: I have no clue what is going on. Your sentence structure is awful. There are no punctuation most of the time and your grammar needs to be improved on.
There are too many details, making the chapter's boring. I don't know who the character is. There's no description or any information. The only thing I know is their names. There is also almost no dialogue.
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