SHORT STORY WINNERS ♥

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The entire management of MONARCHY AWARDS 2020 in conjunction with the judge of the Short Story Genre: Ifeh_love, is pleased to announce the winners of this genre.

RUNNER UP: IN LOVE? by tremma_gold

Blurb/cover: 7
Title: 7
Use of language: 18
Characterization:8
Plot:17
Writing style:16
originality and creativity:7
Total: 80

REVIEW: Great work on the plot and characterization. Vivid description, which is good and mild errors.

Therefore, your cover should use more effort. - Judge Ifeh_love

RUNNER UP: STRIKER SMALLY by SAANVI005

Blurb/cover: 8
Title: 7
Use of language: 18
Characterization: 6
Plot: 17
Writing style: 17
Originality and creativity: 7
Total: 80

REVIEW: Review: Your story was really good, but because it was a short story, doesn't mean it all has to happen to fast.

The story seems a little unrealistic, the way they rapidly developed feelings in the space of a day. You could have taking things a bit slow, given it space. Your punctuation and grammar is flawless. Nice work on your story. - Judge Ifeh_love

THIRD PLACE: CONSEQUENCES by doiseemtocare

Blurb/cover:6
Title:9
Use of language:19
Characterization:9
Plot:19
Writing style:19
originality and creativity:9
Total: 90

REVIEW: Your book is really good and I couldn't stop reading till the end, I even pouted when I found out it wasn't complete yet. It's a great short story, still centred on romance, but it's quite different and unique.

Aside from the fact that I find your book lovely, and creative, and the fact that I would definitely read on, you need to work on your blurb.

The blurb draws attention to one's story. It has to be spicy, and hold content, so people would definitely click read.

Then, you had few grammatical errors in your book. No writer doesn't make mistake, so, a little editing would fix that up.
That's all I noticed. Nice book, really. -Judge Ifeh_love

SECOND PLACE: CONSTRAINT by akeila_agramunn

Blurb/cover:9
Title:10
Use of language:19
Characterization:9
Plot:18
Writing style:19
originality and creativity: 8
Total: 92

REVIEW: Review: Your book has a great plot and I love your creativity. Your description was quite lovely too.

Your punctuational errors were minimal, and a little editing could fix it up. Your book is definitely intriguing, and I'll love to read on. Great work. - Judge Ifeh_love

FIRST PLACE: UNLOVING SEBASTIAN by annieneeedsausername

Blurb/cover: 9
Title:9
Use of language:19
Characterization:9
Plot:19
Writing style:20
originality and creativity:10
Total:95

REVIEW: Your book is really great, honestly and your writing style is definitely unique and flawless. It isn't a usual cliche book, and I love that. Also, the blurb is definitely catch and intriguing. It has touching words and feelings. Well done. - Judge Ifeh_love

CONGRATULATIONS to all winners! You can drop your email address here to receive your respective stickers. First place gets a book cover - cover credit goes to Judge Eddy622)

Ifeh_love kindly follow the first place winner.

Thank you!

Cheers 🍻

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