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Judge: Rhuthwrites__ and AranyaAgnihotri
♤ Book Title: The Painful Truth by mwriter12
Blurb- 9/10
Title -9/10
Language - 18/20
Character -8/10
Plot - 19/20
Writing style - 18/20
Overall -9/10
Total-90/100
Review- Fine. I really enjoyed reading this book. But all I want to say, I think you need to make things more clear. This is just my opinion. Just Do what your heart says.
♤ Book Title: Chasing a memory by sonjaebersole
Blurb - 9/10
Title -10/10
Language -18/20
Character -8/10
Plot -18/20
Writing style - 18/20
Overall - 7/10
Total- 88/100
Review - This story is also nice. I think this author has the potential to make the story even better.
♤ Book Title: Deep Thrust by Richynerd20
Blurb-9/10
Title -9/10
Language -18/20
Character -8/20
Plot - 17/20
Writing style - 18/20
Overall - 8/10
Total - 87
Review: The writing style is awesome. The description... I really love it. I think you should add few powerful dialogs from your story in your blurb to attract readers.
♤ Book Title: The President's daughter by black-cypher
Blurb/Cover: 10
Title: 10
Use of language: 18
Characterization: 8
Plot: 17
Writing Style: 16
Overall, Originality and Creativity: 7
Total: 86/100
Remarks: It's nice, more of a chic-lit with a little twist but work on the plot
♤ Book Title: Life as it is a series by QueenofPepper
Blurb- 7/10
Title - 9/10
Language - 18/20
Character-8/10
Plot -17/20
Writing style - 18/20
Overall - 8/10
Total - 85/100
Review: I think you should not use emoji in your blurb. You should make your blurb better. Please check the punctuation. There are a few grammatical mistakes.
♤ Title: Home away by tremma_gold
Blurb/Cover: 7
Title: 10
Use of language: 18
Characterization: 7
Plot: 14
Writing Style: 18
Overall, Originality and Creativity: 10
Total: 84/100
Remarks: I must say that the book reminds me of Nigeria Culture as am a Nigerian.
It's nice to see people embracing their cultures but you need to work on the description of the book, it doesn't fit the book plot it's more of a 'letter to my mother' type of book. It's nice Nevertheless.
♤ Book Title: Erase and Rewind by Allison_Hei
Blurb/Cover: 8
Title: 10
Use of language: 14
Characterization: 9
Plot: 12
Writing Style: 19
Overall, Originality and Creativity: 8
Total: 80/100
Remarks: It's a mystery type of book, it's nice but needs work, the plot is kinda shaky but all in all it's nice.
♤ Book Title: Over a cup of Tea by divineEarth
Blurb/Cover: 10
Title: 10
Use of language: 12
Characterization: 9
Plot: 12
Writing Style: 13
Overall, Originality and Creativity: 10
Total: 66/100
Remark: Honestly after reading the blurb, my hope was really high.
First chapter: Very good
Second chapter : Good
Third chapter: Acceptable
Fourth Chapter: I don't know anymore
Your book is supposed to be a novel I suppose your writing style doesn't fit that of a novel. There are also dialogue books on wattpad, tag your book as a dialogue book,work on the storyline.
I love your creativity but put in the description - dialogue book
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