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♤ WHIRLWIND by softyhartz
Title: 9
Blurb and cover: 7
Grammar: 18
Plot: 20
Writing style: 18
Characterization : 10
Overall originality and creativity: 7 Total: 89/100
Review: I admire your work, especially how you handled the characterization of the story. I love the title, it makes any reader wanna pick up the book. But I don't think the cover of the book is perfect for such story.
♤ Book Title: FOR THE LOVE OF THE GAME by AzulMidnight
Title: 8
Blurb and cover : 8
Characterization : 9
Grammar: 18
Plot :18
Writing style : 18
Originality and Creativity: 9
Total: 88/100
Review: I love your main male character. As much as he is fictional, he also seems real to me. I think I'm in love... Great title for the book though, even if it depicts what the story is about.
♤ Book title: OH MY DEVIL by thelazylemon
Title: 9
Blurb and cover : 7
Grammar : 13
Characterization :7
Plot: 17
Writing style: 15
Overall Originality and creativity : 7 Total: 75/100
Review: There's no paragraph if there's space between the lines. I also came across chapters/sentences in which you interchange dashes with commas.
♤Book Title: DON'T' LEAVE ME by LDJBLM
Title:6
Blurb&Cover : 7
Grammar: 10
Characterization: 5
Plot: 14
Overall Creativity and originality: 8
Writing style: 14
Total =64/100
Review: en dash and periods come before quotation marks. You also use the dashes for further details on a character or an event. One can easily tell about the story without having to read the book, so... I'm suggesting you could add something spicy to the title, blurb and get a really intriguing cover. Or better still, change the title if you wish
♤ Book title: CHILD PARAMOUR by divineEarth
Title: 8
Blurb and cover: 8
Grammar : 8
Writing style:10
Plot:12
Characterization : 5
Originality and Creativity: 7
Total: 58/100
Review: Use italics when writing in flashbacks. I noticed too that you mix up your tenses. If you're writing in past tense, then the verb and actions should be illustrated to be in the past. Unless you're writing a comic or jokes and humour, I don't see the need to use emojis in the main story.
♤ Book title: HOMEWRECKER by Nightingale520
Title: 6
Blurb&Cover: 5
Grammar: 10
Characterization: 5
Plot: 15
Writing style: 10
Originality: 7
Total =58/100
Review: Good writing dear, but you just need to touch and improve on some things.
While reading I noticed that you used lowercase sometimes in writing the names of the characters. Note too that capital letter starts after an exclamation or question mark.
You should also improve your description or blurb of the story. Get a better cover for your book. Try to make your characters more real by showing some events in the story...not everything should be narrated or explained. And the title and cover of your book needs something catchy.
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