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♤ BOOK TITLE: Highway of Lights by softyhartz
Blurb/cover- 8
Title: 9
Use of Language: 19
Characterization :9
Writing style: 19
Plot: 17
Overall originality /creativity: 8
Total: 89
Review: Highway of Lights is a unique story with a nice story line and unique title.
This book has element of humour in it making readers totally hooked to it.
With only two characters in the book, it is still very appealing to the readers.
♤BOOK TITLE: The urban mantra by peachyindy
Blurb: 8
Title: 10
Use of Language: 18
Characterization: 8
Writing style: 17
Plot: 18
Overall originality and creativity:7
Total:86
Review: The urban mantra is a nice story with a totally unique title and I love it as the title reflects in my mind whenever I read each chapters.
Each scenes are thoroughly described making it easy for the readers to have a mental picture of how the characters are.
My suggestion is that the writer improves on the emotional aspect of the story as it is one of the elements that makes up a story.
♤ BOOK TITLE: Command me to be well by HeraHarker
Blurb/description:10
Title/cover:8
Use of language:16
Characterization: 7
Plot:18
Writing style:17
Originality/ Creativity:10
TOTAL:86
REVIEW: Your title is very unique and the storyline itself is beautiful. I'll only advise you try using compound and complex sentences to avoid a situation where we have lot and lots of simple sentences.
There were some punctuation and grammatical errors too: for instance, you capitalized the wrong words. I know a re-edit will purge these out. Beautiful piece!
♤ BOOK TITLE: The art of unrequited love by hiddenbottle
Blurb:9
Title: 8
Use of Language: 18
Characterization: 8
Writing style: 17
Plot: 17
Overall originality and creativity: 8
Total: 84
Review: The art of unrequited love is a unique story with a different storyline. Description and imagery is so good that I can visualize each scenes and have a feel of whatever the character feels.
This story will have been better than this if the scene where Maddie goes to visit her parents had more emotion in it.
As the title suggest, we know that Maddie's love to her parents is unrequited but it isn't very detailed as it should be. There should have been a chapter where the readers are able to feel/see why Maddie's love is unrequited.
But nevertheless, the story is nice and I enjoyed it.
♤ BOOK TITLE: See me too by Emy_Akpan
Blurb/description:5
Title/cover:6
Use of language:15
Characterization: 10
Plot:18
Writing style:19
Originality/ Creativity:10
TOTAL: 83
REVIEW: An applause for your creativity. I'm really impressed. Nevertheless, I advise you edit your work to purge out errors tied around your use of punctuations and grammar.
Many a time, your dialogue ended with no punctuation and I noticed you used 'of cause' instead of 'of course' and 'Los Angelis' instead of 'Los Angeles'. Beautiful work by the way!
♤ BOOK TITLE: My Onscreen partner by afuashi
Blurb/description: 10
Title/cover:7
Use of language:14
Characterization: 8
Plot:18
Writing style:15
Originality/ Creativity:10
TOTAL:82
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